Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I do. I basically chat with my friends every day and we just talk about, uh, everything around us and Rainbow about our daily life.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Everything we just rainbow on everything around us by the people and everything happened last week and I was feeling it made me feel supported and just like connected with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend 'cause I prefer a meaningful and maybe a deeper conversation with a certain people. Like it's easier to focus on your personal feeling when you're face one people instead of facing a group of people, right?
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face because it's much easier to avoid misunderstanding through your body language and your facial expression, and I feel more supported when someone look at me.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
No, most of the time I try to avoid arguments with my friends because I'm sort of people who are afraid of arguing. So I was just like, yeah, I agree with you, but I'm not sure is it healthy in our relationship.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有些重复和不自然,比如“Rainbow about our daily life”不清楚且不合适。建议回答时直接表达喜欢聊天的原因,并避免使用不相关或模糊的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected and share our daily experiences.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了不合适的词汇“rainbow”,句子结构混乱,表达不清晰。建议用清晰的句子描述聊天内容,并用连接词使表达连贯。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about recent events, our feelings, and things that happened last week, which makes me feel supported and connected with my friends.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但有语法错误和用词不当,如“a certain people”和“face one people”。建议注意单复数和表达准确性,同时使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for more meaningful and deeper conversations. Moreover, it's easier to focus on personal feelings when talking one-on-one rather than in a group.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰,但有小的语法错误,如“someone look at me”应为“someone looks at me”。建议注意主谓一致,并适当使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it's easier to avoid misunderstandings through body language and facial expressions. Also, I feel more supported when someone looks at me directly.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然,如“I'm sort of people”。建议用更自然的表达方式,并注意句子结构和时态。
Ví dụ: No, I usually try to avoid arguments with my friends because I am someone who dislikes conflict. Although I might agree to keep the peace, I sometimes wonder if avoiding arguments is healthy for our relationship.
× Yeah, I do. I basically chat with my friends every day and we just talk about, uh, everything around us and Rainbow about our daily life.
✓ Yeah, I do. I basically chat with my friends every day and we just talk about, uh, everything around us and about our daily life.
The word 'Rainbow' is incorrectly used here; it seems to be a mistaken insertion. The correct phrase should be 'and about our daily life' to maintain coherence and correct pronoun usage.
× Everything we just rainbow on everything around us by the people and everything happened last week and I was feeling it made me feel supported and just like connected with my friends.
✓ Everything, we just talk about everything around us, the people, and everything that happened last week, and I feel it makes me feel supported and connected with my friends.
The sentence contains unclear and incorrect pronoun and verb usage. 'Rainbow' is incorrect here; it should be 'talk about'. Also, 'I was feeling it made me feel' is awkward; present tense 'I feel it makes me feel' fits better for habitual action.
× I prefer to chat with only one friend 'cause I prefer a meaningful and maybe a deeper conversation with a certain people.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend 'cause I prefer a meaningful and maybe a deeper conversation with certain people.
The phrase 'a certain people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.
× Like it's easier to focus on your personal feeling when you're face one people instead of facing a group of people, right?
✓ Like it's easier to focus on your personal feelings when you're facing one person instead of facing a group of people, right?
'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context. 'Face one people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so it should be 'one person'. Also, 'face' should be 'facing' to match the verb form.
× I prefer to communicate face to face because it's much easier to avoid misunderstanding through your body language and your facial expression, and I feel more supported when someone look at me.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it's much easier to avoid misunderstandings through your body language and your facial expressions, and I feel more supported when someone looks at me.
'Misunderstanding' should be plural 'misunderstandings' to match the context. 'Facial expression' should be plural 'facial expressions'. 'Someone look' should be 'someone looks' to agree with third person singular.
× No, most of the time I try to avoid arguments with my friends because I'm sort of people who are afraid of arguing.
✓ No, most of the time I try to avoid arguments with my friends because I'm the sort of person who is afraid of arguing.
'I'm sort of people' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm the sort of person' to correctly use the singular noun with the article 'the' and match the subject.
× So I was just like, yeah, I agree with you, but I'm not sure is it healthy in our relationship.
✓ So I was just like, yeah, I agree with you, but I'm not sure if it is healthy for our relationship.
The sentence structure is incorrect. 'I'm not sure is it healthy' should be 'I'm not sure if it is healthy'. Also, 'in our relationship' should be 'for our relationship' to use the correct preposition.