Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to chat with my friends. I usually use Line and Instagram to talk about and the activities I did or the plan for the weekends. It's very fun.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat about the planning for the umm meeting, such as the dates, UMM place and so on. And also I talked about uh, things.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer chatting with only one friends because in a group I hesitate to talk because umm sometimes there is few replies on me so I prefer.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer communicate face to face because on on SNS it sometimes generates the time gap and we can't converse have conversations smoothly. So I prefer face to face.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
I don't usually argue with my friends because I'm almost adult. When I was a child I sometimes argue with my friends by insisting my opinions, but nowadays we usually listen to each others ideas.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答は基本的な内容を含んでいますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「talk about and the activities I did or the plan for the weekends」は不完全な文であり、より明確で自然な表現に改善が必要です。また、詳細を具体的に述べることで、回答を豊かにできます。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually use apps like Line and Instagram to talk about the activities I did during the week and my plans for the weekend. It's always fun to share and catch up with them.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答が曖昧で不完全です。「umm」や「uh」などの言葉が多く、話の流れが途切れています。また、「things」という表現は具体性に欠けます。質問に対して直接的かつ具体的な内容を、論理的に繋げて話す練習が必要です。
Ví dụ: I usually chat about planning meetings with my friends, such as deciding the dates and places to meet. Besides that, we also talk about our hobbies and recent experiences.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 文法の誤り("only one friends"は誤り)や不自然な表現が目立ちます。また、理由の説明が不明瞭で、話の流れが途切れています。より正確な文法と明確な理由付けを心がけ、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習をしましょう。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group, I sometimes hesitate to speak since there are few replies directed at me. Therefore, one-on-one conversations feel more comfortable.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 文法ミス("prefer communicate"は"prefer to communicate"が正しい)や繰り返し("on on")があります。また、理由の説明は良いですが、より自然で流暢な表現に改善が必要です。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because social media often causes time gaps, making conversations less smooth. Therefore, I find in-person communication more effective.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 内容は理解できますが、文法の誤り("I'm almost adult"は不自然)や表現の改善が必要です。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。
Ví dụ: I don't usually argue with my friends because I have matured. When I was a child, I sometimes argued by insisting on my opinions, but now we usually listen to each other's ideas.
× I prefer chatting with only one friends because in a group I hesitate to talk because umm sometimes there is few replies on me so I prefer.
✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group I hesitate to talk since sometimes there are few replies to me, so I prefer.
The word 'friends' should be singular 'friend' because 'only one' indicates a single person. Also, 'there is few replies' is incorrect; it should be 'there are few replies' because 'replies' is plural. The preposition 'on me' is incorrect; it should be 'to me'. These corrections improve subject-verb agreement and preposition usage.
× I usually use Line and Instagram to talk about and the activities I did or the plan for the weekends.
✓ I usually use Line and Instagram to talk about the activities I did or the plans for the weekend.
The phrase 'talk about and the activities' is incorrect; 'and' is unnecessary here. Also, 'the plan for the weekends' should be 'the plans for the weekend' to match plural 'activities' and singular 'weekend' as a time period. Correct preposition and article usage is important here.
× And also I talked about uh, things.
✓ And also I talk about, uh, things.
The question is about usual chatting topics, so present tense 'talk' is appropriate instead of past tense 'talked'. Using present tense indicates habitual action.
× Nowadays we usually listen to each others ideas.
✓ Nowadays we usually listen to each other's ideas.
The phrase 'each others' is incorrect; the correct possessive form is 'each other's' with an apostrophe. This shows possession correctly.
× I prefer communicate face to face because on on SNS it sometimes generates the time gap and we can't converse have conversations smoothly.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because on SNS it sometimes causes a time gap and we can't have conversations smoothly.
The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus base verb: 'prefer to communicate'. The phrase 'converse have conversations' is redundant; 'have conversations' suffices. Also, 'generates the time gap' is better expressed as 'causes a time gap'. These corrections improve verb form and clarity.