Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially someone who's on the same page with me and can understand me really well.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We usually tell about daily stuff like the thing we do in a day of the food we try and also some interesting topics. Or we can we always share short videos on social media.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend because sometimes chatting with a group of people can make me feel a little bit nervous and also overwhelmed.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat face to face because I can see other people's facial expressions and hear their tones which can help me understand their feelings.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
No, not really. We only share about some interesting stuff or easy stuff on social media. We always try to avoid some serious or controversial topics, especially about politics or some other stuff, because we feel like we should talk something easy easily.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然,但表达略显口语化且不够正式。建议使用更正式且多样的表达方式,避免重复和口语缩写。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, particularly those who share similar interests and understand me well.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较杂乱,语法和表达不够清晰。建议结构更清晰,使用连接词使内容连贯,并具体说明话题。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about our daily activities, the food we try, and interesting topics. Additionally, we often share short videos on social media.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但可以使用更多连接词和丰富词汇,使表达更流畅自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with just one friend because group conversations can sometimes make me feel nervous and overwhelmed.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且表达清晰,但可适当增加连接词和丰富词汇,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to observe facial expressions and hear tones, which helps me better understand others' feelings.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: No, we rarely argue. We usually share light and interesting topics on social media and avoid serious or controversial subjects like politics.
× We usually tell about daily stuff like the thing we do in a day of the food we try and also some interesting topics.
✓ We usually talk about daily stuff like the things we do in a day, the food we try, and also some interesting topics.
动词'tell'后面不应该直接跟'about',应使用'talk about'表示谈论某事。此外,'the thing'应为复数'the things',因为指的是多项内容。句子中缺少逗号分隔不同内容,增加逗号使句子更清晰。
× Or we can we always share short videos on social media.
✓ We can always share short videos on social media.
句子中'Or'的使用不恰当,且出现了重复的'we',应去掉'Or'和多余的'we',使句子结构正确。
× I prefer to chat face to face because I can see other people's facial expressions and hear their tones which can help me understand their feelings.
✓ I prefer to chat face-to-face because I can see other people's facial expressions and hear their tones, which can help me understand their feelings.
'face to face'作为副词短语应写作'face-to-face',且在'hear their tones'和'which'之间应加逗号,表示非限制性定语从句。
× We only share about some interesting stuff or easy stuff on social media.
✓ We only share some interesting stuff or easy stuff on social media.
动词'share'后不需要介词'about',应直接跟宾语。
× because we feel like we should talk something easy easily.
✓ because we feel like we should talk about something easy, easily.
'talk'后应加介词'about'表示谈论某事;'something easy'中'easy'作形容词修饰'something','easily'作为副词修饰动词'talk',两者都需要保留,但应分开使用并加逗号。