Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami. Misalnya, gunakan 'someone accompanying me' bukan 'someone accompanied me'. Jawaban juga bisa dibuat lebih efektif dan alami dengan menghindari kalimat yang terlalu panjang dan tidak jelas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it makes me feel accompanied and supported in my life.

Gợi ý: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan tata bahasa yang benar. Hindari pengulangan kata 'about' dan buat kalimat contoh lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide.

Ví dụ: I usually chat about work, habits, and lifestyle. For example, sometimes when I feel lonely in the middle of the night, a friend messages me on WhatsApp, which cheers me up.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan bentuk jamak yang benar ('one friend' bukan 'one friends'). Jelaskan alasan dengan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more comfortable. When I chat in a group, I sometimes feel like I can't be myself.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami. Misalnya, gunakan 'express my ideas' daripada 'express my topic'. Gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih lancar.

Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my friends rather than through social media because I can see their facial expressions, which makes it easier to express my ideas clearly.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat lebih jelas dan alami. Misalnya, gunakan 'in a positive way' dan jelaskan maksud 'when I'm not' dengan lebih spesifik. Gunakan linking words untuk memperjelas hubungan ide.

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, but in a positive way. I always try to find the positive side when I disagree with them.

× I love to chat with my friends because I feel like there is someone accompanied me in my life.

✓ I love to chat with my friends because I feel like there is someone accompanying me in my life.

The verb 'accompanied' is incorrectly used in the past tense form here. After 'there is someone', the verb should be in the present participle (-ing) form to indicate ongoing action. So, 'accompanying' is correct.

× I usually chat about everything about works, about habit, about lifestyle.

✓ I usually chat about everything related to work, habits, and lifestyle.

The preposition 'about' is overused and incorrectly applied. 'Works' should be 'work' (uncountable), and 'habit' should be plural 'habits'. Using 'related to' is more natural here.

× For example like I was in the middle of night and then I feel so alone and my friend chat me in WhatsApp.

✓ For example, I was in the middle of the night and then I felt so alone and my friend chatted with me on WhatsApp.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Feel' should be past tense 'felt' to match 'was'. 'Chat' should be past tense 'chatted'. Also, 'in the middle of night' needs the article 'the'. 'Chat me' is incorrect; it should be 'chatted with me'. 'On WhatsApp' is the correct preposition.

× I prefer to chat with only one friends because I feel comfortable to chat only one friends.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I feel comfortable chatting with only one friend.

'Friends' is plural but should be singular 'friend' after 'one'. Also, 'to chat only one friends' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting with only one friend' for natural expression.

× When I'm chat in Group, it feels like I don't really like myself.

✓ When I'm chatting in a group, it feels like I don't really like myself.

'I'm chat' is incorrect; the present continuous form 'I'm chatting' is needed. 'Group' needs an article 'a'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends rather than to social media because I can see the expression of my partner talking and it is easy to express my topic what I want to talk with my friend.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends rather than via social media because I can see my partner's expressions and it is easy to express the topics I want to talk about with my friend.

The phrase 'rather than to social media' is incorrect; 'rather than via social media' is correct. 'Expression of my partner talking' is awkward; 'my partner's expressions' is better. 'My topic what I want to talk with my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'the topics I want to talk about with my friend'.

× Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends but in positive way.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends but in a positive way.

The phrase 'in positive way' is missing the article 'a' before 'positive way'.

× I always find the positive side when I'm not and when I disagree with my friends.

✓ I always find the positive side when I don't agree and when I disagree with my friends.

The phrase 'when I'm not' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'when I don't agree' to make sense in context.