Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有點冗長且語法錯誤，建議使用簡潔且正確的句子結構，並避免重複。可以先直接回答問題，再用一兩句話說明原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it makes me feel comfortable. I can share my feelings and thoughts with them, which makes me happy.

Gợi ý: 回答中語法不正確且內容不夠具體，建議使用正確的時態和句型，並提供更具體的細節來豐富內容。

Ví dụ: I usually talk about my work, what I did during the day, and sometimes about my feelings or expenses. For example, I might share how busy I was or if I went out with friends.

Gợi ý: 回答有點混亂且語法錯誤，建議先清楚表達自己的偏好，再用連接詞說明原因，並注意句子結構。

Ví dụ: It depends on the group. If all members are my friends, I prefer chatting in a group. But if they are strangers, I prefer talking to just one close friend.

Gợi ý: 回答內容有點重複且語法不流暢，建議使用更自然的表達方式，並用連接詞使句子更連貫。

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer social media when I don't want to go out. But if I feel like going out, I enjoy chatting face-to-face, like when we go to karaoke together.

Gợi ý: 回答中有語法錯誤且表達不清楚，建議用更清楚的句子說明爭吵的原因，並避免重複和不必要的詞語。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often argue with my friends. Usually, we argue when I complain about my family or when I don't want to do certain things, like work or travel to visit family.

× Yes, I would like to chatting with my friends because I feels like make me feel more comfortable and then I can share any thoughts with them like about happy, about angry, anything that can talk to them and make me feel like really happy.

✓ Yes, I would like to chat with my friends because I feel it makes me feel more comfortable and then I can share any thoughts with them like about happiness, anger, anything that I can talk to them about and it makes me feel really happy.

The phrase 'would like to chatting' is incorrect; after 'would like to' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'chat' instead of 'chatting'. Also, 'I feels' should be 'I feel' to agree with the subject. The phrase 'like make me feel' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it makes me feel'. Additionally, 'about happy, about angry' should be 'about happiness, anger' to use correct noun forms. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yes, I would like to chatting with my friends because I feels like make me feel more comfortable and then I can share any thoughts with them like about happy, about angry, anything that can talk to them and make me feel like really happy.

✓ Yes, I would like to chat with my friends because I feel it makes me feel more comfortable and then I can share any thoughts with them like about happiness, anger, anything that I can talk to them about and it makes me feel really happy.

The verb 'feels' is incorrectly conjugated for the subject 'I'; it should be 'feel' in present tense. Also, 'can talk to them' needs a subject 'I' to be correct: 'anything that I can talk to them about'.

× I usually share my thoughts about the work and then what do I do today? So it's like something about work and then what? Maybe I going out today and then how do I feel and how much money is spent? That's all.

✓ I usually share my thoughts about work and then what I did today. So it's like something about work and then what? Maybe I am going out today and then how I feel and how much money I spent. That's all.

The phrase 'Maybe I going out today' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for present continuous tense: 'I am going out today'. Also, 'what do I do today?' is a question form in a statement; it should be 'what I did today' to fit the narrative. 'How much money is spent?' should be 'how much money I spent' to maintain subject consistency and tense.

× I think it depends on what kind of group is this group are of them all the member are my friends or it just strangers? If they are my friends I would love to share with a group but if they are strangers I would love to share my friend. Only my friends.

✓ I think it depends on what kind of group this is. Are all the members my friends or just strangers? If they are my friends, I would love to share with a group, but if they are strangers, I would prefer to share with my friend. Only my friends.

The sentence structure is confusing and pronouns are misused. 'Is this group are of them all the member are my friends or it just strangers?' is ungrammatical. It should be split into two questions: 'this is' and 'are all the members my friends or just strangers?'. Also, 'share my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'share with my friend'.

× I think this question depends on my emotion because sometimes, sometimes I don't want to go out, then I would choose the social media. But if I want to go out today, like we can go out together to the karaoke, then I would like to chat with each other face to face.

✓ I think this question depends on my emotions because sometimes I don't want to go out, so I would choose social media. But if I want to go out today, like going out together to karaoke, then I would like to chat face to face.

'Depends on my emotion' should be 'depends on my emotions' (plural). 'Choose the social media' is incorrect; 'choose social media' is correct because 'social media' is uncountable here. 'Go out together to the karaoke' should be 'go out together to karaoke' or 'go to karaoke' without 'the'. 'Chat with each other face to face' is redundant; 'chat face to face' is sufficient.

× Yes, I argue with friends a lot, really a lot. I usually share something like the complain about my family and then something that I don't wanna do about any complain like, uh, I don't wanna do this work or I don't wanna travel to my family. So a lot read a lot.

✓ Yes, I argue with friends a lot, really a lot. I usually share complaints about my family and things I don't want to do, like I don't want to do this work or travel to my family. So, a lot, really a lot.

'The complain' is incorrect; it should be 'complaints' (plural noun). 'I don't wanna do about any complain' is ungrammatical; it should be 'things I don't want to do'. 'I don't wanna' is informal but acceptable in speaking; 'wanna' is a contraction of 'want to'. 'Travel to my family' is awkward; better to say 'travel to see my family'. 'So a lot read a lot' is unclear; corrected to 'So, a lot, really a lot' for emphasis.