Museum— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "that that" and use plural forms correctly. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I absolutely think museums are important because they preserve valuable architecture and objects that resonate with our history, which we can show to younger generations."

Ví dụ: Yes, I absolutely think museums are important because they preserve valuable architecture and objects that resonate with our history, which we can show to younger generations.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but can be clearer and more natural. Avoid phrases like "limited kind of architecture" and "any kinds of museum." Use singular/plural forms correctly and add linking words to improve coherence. For example, "I live in a small town with limited historical architecture, so we don't have any museums or parks. However, we do have basic facilities like schools and hospitals."

Ví dụ: I live in a small town with limited historical architecture, so we don't have any museums or parks. However, we do have basic facilities like schools and hospitals.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors, such as "don't often abuse him" and "in our City Museum are known." Try to be clear and direct, and use linking words to explain reasons. For example, "As I mentioned earlier, I don't often visit museums because there are none in my town. The nearest museum is about 600 kilometers away in Kathmandu, so I have to travel there to learn about Nepal's history and culture."

Ví dụ: As I mentioned earlier, I don't often visit museums because there are none in my town. The nearest museum is about 600 kilometers away in Kathmandu, so I have to travel there to learn about Nepal's history and culture.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has some hesitations and repetitions. Try to avoid filler words like "umm" and repeated words. Also, be more specific and use linking words. For example, "The last time I visited a museum was in 2017 during a family trip to Thailand. There, I saw many temples and learned a lot about Thai traditions."

Ví dụ: The last time I visited a museum was in 2017 during a family trip to Thailand. There, I saw many temples and learned a lot about Thai traditions.

× Yes, I absolutely think museums are important because it is the part of the history we can show to our younger generation.

✓ Yes, I absolutely think museums are important because they are part of the history we can show to our younger generation.

The subject 'museums' is plural, so the verb and pronoun should also be plural. 'It is' should be changed to 'they are' to agree with the plural subject 'museums'.

× First of all, museum contains lots of valuable architecture and the objects that that resonates with the past history.

✓ First of all, museums contain lots of valuable architecture and objects that resonate with past history.

The noun 'museum' should be plural 'museums' to match the context. Also, 'resonates' should be 'resonate' to agree with the plural subject 'objects'. 'The objects' is better without 'the' here for general meaning.

× That's why we don't have any kinds of museum.

✓ That's why we don't have any kind of museum.

The phrase 'any kinds of museum' is incorrect. 'Kind' should be singular when preceded by 'any' and followed by a singular noun 'museum'.

× We only have resources for general like school, hospitals etcetera.

✓ We only have resources for general things like schools, hospitals, etcetera.

'School' should be plural 'schools' to match 'hospitals' and the plural context. Also, 'general' needs a noun like 'things' after it to be grammatically correct.

× As I stated earlier, I don't often abuse him because in our City Museum are known and the nearest museum in our country is like 600 kilometers away.

✓ As I stated earlier, I don't often visit them because museums in our city are not well known and the nearest museum in our country is about 600 kilometers away.

'Abuse him' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo for 'visit them'. 'City Museum are known' is incorrect; it should be 'museums in our city are not well known'. Pronouns and verb agreement corrected accordingly.

× So I have to reach Kathmandu to visit any kind of museum and learn about history and culture of Nepal.

✓ So I have to go to Kathmandu to visit any kind of museum and learn about the history and culture of Nepal.

The verb 'reach' is less natural here; 'go to' is better for traveling to a place. Also, 'history and culture' should be preceded by 'the' as specific topics.

× The last time I visited a museum was probably probably in 2017 when I umm, when I when I went on a tour to Thailand with my family.

✓ The last time I visited a museum was probably in 2017 when I went on a tour to Thailand with my family.

Repeated words 'probably probably' and 'when I when I' are redundant and should be removed for clarity. The past tense 'went' is correctly used.

× There I got to see many temples as well and lot about the Thailand tradition etcetera.

✓ There I got to see many temples as well and learn a lot about Thai traditions, etcetera.

'Lot' should be 'a lot' and 'Thailand tradition' should be plural 'Thai traditions'. Also, 'learn' is added to complete the meaning of 'and lot about...'.