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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

No, I don't. I only, uh, go to libraries, uh, once a month.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

When I go to library, I often reading book, uh, and uh, complete homework. Mm-hmm.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did when I was a kid. I often go to libraries, to a reading, comic and entertainment after a long study.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

I think the Chinese kids often go to library, uh, two times a week.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Be more fluent, avoid fillers and give a slightly fuller but concise response. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief reason or detail using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid hesitation sounds.

Ví dụ: Not really. I only visit the library about once a month because I prefer to study online and borrow most books from friends.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and a clear structure: topic sentence + supporting details linked with words like "and" or "so". Mention specific activities and be precise (e.g., "read novels," "study for exams"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid fillers.

Ví dụ: When I go to the library, I usually read novels and study for my classes. I also use the quiet study area to complete homework and review notes.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Answer with correct tense and smoother phrasing. Give a topic sentence in past tense, then add 1–2 specific supporting details with linking words like "and" or "because". Avoid awkward phrasing like "to a reading" or unnecessary words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I went to the library a lot when I was a child. I often borrowed comics and storybooks, and I used it as a place to relax after long hours of studying.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: Make your opinion concise and add a brief reason or qualifier. Use natural phrasing (e.g., "I think" or "In my experience") and avoid fillers. Provide a reason or variation (e.g., urban vs rural) to show nuance.

Ví dụ: I think many Chinese children visit the library about twice a week, especially in cities where schools encourage reading. However, children in rural areas may go less often due to fewer facilities.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of definite article

× When I go to library, I often reading book, uh, and uh, complete homework. Mm-hmm.

When I go to the library, I often read books and complete homework.

The phrase 'go to library' needs the definite article 'the' (Grammar problem type ID 17). 'Reading book' is incorrect: the verb should be 'read' (base form) to match the present simple habitual action (Grammar problem type ID 6), and 'book' should be plural 'books' to indicate the general activity (singular/plural issue, ID 1). Remove filler sounds. Suggestion: use 'When I go to the library, I often read books and complete homework.'

Past tense issue

× Yes, I did when I was a kid. I often go to libraries, to a reading, comic and entertainment after a long study.

Yes, I did when I was a kid. I often went to libraries to read comics and for entertainment after a long study session.

Speaker is describing past habitual action, so verbs should be in the past tense (Grammar problem type ID 5). 'I often go' should be 'I often went'. 'to a reading, comic and entertainment' is ungrammatical: use infinitive 'to read comics' and a prepositional phrase 'for entertainment'. Also add article 'a' or 'a study session' to complete the noun phrase (articles and sentence structure issues, IDs 22 and 26). Suggestion: use 'I often went to libraries to read comics and for entertainment after a long study session.'

Incorrect use of the definite article

× I think the Chinese kids often go to library, uh, two times a week.

I think Chinese kids often go to the library twice a week.

'the Chinese kids' is unnatural when speaking generally about children; use 'Chinese kids' or 'Chinese children' without 'the' (definite article error, ID 17/22). 'go to library' needs 'the' (ID 17). Use 'twice a week' rather than 'two times a week' for natural adverbial frequency (adverb placement/word choice, ID 20/13). Suggestion: say 'I think Chinese kids often go to the library twice a week.'

Verb in the present participle form

× When I go to library, I often reading book, uh, and uh, complete homework. Mm-hmm.

When I go to the library, I often read books and complete homework.

'reading' is the present participle; here the simple present 'read' is required for habitual actions (Grammar problem type ID 10/6). Also 'complete homework' is acceptable but sounds better as 'complete my homework' to specify possession (pronoun/article issue, IDs 12/22). Suggestion: use 'I often read books and complete my homework.'

Singular and plural issue

× No, I don't. I only, uh, go to libraries, uh, once a month.

No, I don't. I only go to the library once a month.

'go to libraries' is plural which implies visiting many different libraries; in this context 'the library' (singular) is more natural for habitual reference (Grammar problem type ID 1). Also 'once a month' is correct; remove fillers. Suggestion: use 'I only go to the library once a month.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
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