Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a direct, present-tense topic sentence, avoid hesitation and unclear words, and limit to under five sentences. Clarify reasons with specific details (e.g., travel time, online resources you use) and use linking words like "because" and "so" for coherence.

Ví dụ: I don't often go to the library because it is far from my home and I can access articles and e-books online. For example, I use academic databases and news websites, which save me travel time and let me study at any hour.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence about your typical activities, remove repetitions, and add one or two specific details about types of books/articles and how you apply the knowledge. Use linking words like "for example" and "so" to explain consequences.

Ví dụ: When I go to the library, I usually read research articles or borrow books related to my job. For example, I read marketing case studies to learn new strategies, so I can apply them at work and stay up to date with colleagues.

Gợi ý: This answer is mostly clear and relevant. Improve by correcting minor vocabulary and pronunciation errors ("books" not "boots"), and combine sentences into a concise, natural reply with one supporting detail and a linking word like "so" or "therefore."

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library often because it was far from our home. Instead, my mother bought me books, so I spent a lot of time reading at home and improving my vocabulary.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear general opinion, avoid unclear or incorrect words ("e-books" not "E birds"), and give one specific reason and an example of digital resources. Use linking phrases like "because" and "for example" to make the answer coherent and concise.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure about every child, but many Chinese children prefer e-books and online resources because they are convenient at home. For example, students use learning apps and digital libraries that offer videos and interactive exercises, which make studying easier.

× I didn't, uh, usually go to the library.

✓ I don't usually go to the library.

The student used past tense 'didn't' but is describing a habitual present action. Use simple present 'don't usually go' for habits. Suggestion: use present simple for regular habits (I don't usually...).

× I prefer you boots or online articles, which is convenient to me because uh, libraries so far from my place.

✓ I prefer e-books or online articles, which are convenient for me because libraries are far from my place.

Several errors: 'you boots' is likely 'e-books' (lexical error). 'Which is' must agree with plural 'e-books or online articles' so use 'are'. Use 'convenient for me' not 'to me'. Add verb 'are' for 'libraries are far'. Suggestion: choose correct word 'e-books', ensure subject-verb agreement and correct preposition 'for'.

× I need to go to the particular place and, uh, read an answer.

✓ I would need to go to a specific place to read printed material.

The original is vague and ungrammatical: 'read an answer' is unclear. 'Particular place' better as 'a specific place'. Use infinitive 'to read' and clarify object. Suggestion: make purpose clear and use precise nouns (printed material, books).

× When I go to library IPA read any research articles or pick any book that is related to my work, I usually do this because I so I usually do this to develop my skills and apply into the apply the skill into my work so that it really helps me to catch up my with my friends.

✓ When I go to the library, I read research articles or pick books related to my work. I usually do this to develop my skills and apply them to my work so that I can keep up with my friends.

Multiple issues: missing article 'the library'; 'IPA' is transcription error — remove. Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I read' and 'I pick'. 'Books' plural fits. 'Apply into the apply the skill into my work' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'apply them to my work'. 'Catch up my with my friends' -> 'keep up with my friends'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct articles, pronouns, and collocations ('apply to', 'keep up with').

× No, I didn't often go to the library when I was a child because it was too far from my place.

✓ No, I didn't often go to the library when I was a child because it was too far from my home.

Sentence is mostly correct past tense for a childhood habit. Change 'my place' to more natural 'my home'. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('far from my home').

× My mother usually bought me boots and I used to read them a lot, which helped me improve my vocabulary.

✓ My mother usually bought me books and I used to read them a lot, which helped me improve my vocabulary.

'Boots' is a wrong word; should be 'books'. 'Bought me books' is correct. Suggestion: check spelling and word choice; 'books' fits the context.

× I'm not so sure about every child, but many Chinese kids often prefer E birds and online articles rather than going to the libraries because it is very convenient and available in home with the many with the multimodal media resources and apps, that makes studies very easier.

✓ I'm not sure about every child, but many Chinese kids often prefer e-books and online articles rather than going to libraries because they are very convenient and available at home with many multimodal media resources and apps, which makes studying much easier.

Multiple issues: 'E birds' -> 'e-books'. 'Going to the libraries' -> 'going to libraries' (no article). 'It is very convenient' should refer to plural 'they are very convenient'. Use preposition 'at home' not 'in home'. 'That makes studies very easier' should be 'which makes studying much easier' — use gerund and 'much easier'. Suggestion: ensure correct word forms, subject-verb agreement, prepositions, and relative clause structure.