Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan alami, namun Anda bisa membuatnya lebih efektif dengan menghindari pengulangan dan memperjelas alasan Anda. Misalnya, Anda bisa menggabungkan kalimat agar lebih ringkas dan menggunakan kata penghubung yang tepat.

Ví dụ: No, I rarely go to the library because there isn't a convenient one near my home; instead, I usually visit a nearby bookstore to read sample books, which allows me to enjoy reading without traveling far.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi penggunaan kata penghubung bisa diperbaiki agar kalimat lebih koheren. Selain itu, hindari penggunaan kata-kata yang kurang pasti seperti 'probably' dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih langsung dan spesifik.

Ví dụ: Although I don't visit the library often, when I do, I focus on completing my assignments and conducting overdue research by looking for reference books or academic journals, which helps me become more productive.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, namun ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang bisa diperbaiki. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat lebih singkat dan jelas serta gunakan kata kerja yang tepat.

Ví dụ: I don't remember going to the library as a kid, but I do recall visiting one library mainly to play in the kids' section, where there were many games and toys to enjoy.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang fokus dan ada pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Cobalah untuk langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan jelas dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur tanpa filler seperti 'uh'.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Indonesia, children rarely visit libraries during their free time because they prefer using their phones.

× No, I rarely go to the library because there isn't convenient one near my home.

✓ No, I rarely go to the library because there isn't a convenient one near my home.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular noun 'convenient one'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I don't remember if I ever went to library when I was a kid, but I do remember that I visited this one library not particularly to read books, but it was to play on the kids sections.

✓ I don't remember if I ever went to the library when I was a kid, but I do remember that I visited this one library not particularly to read books, but it was to play in the kids' sections.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. Also, 'play on the kids sections' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' and 'kids sections' should be possessive as 'kids' sections' to indicate sections belonging to kids.

× They have a lot of games in there and I play with a lot of toys.

✓ They have a lot of games in there and I play with a lot of toys.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.