Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to the library. The free book resorts and comfortable study environment here make me come here frequently.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I often come here to read some books related to my major and to study, especially when I need to prepare for some exams.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was young, I basically went to the children's library in our province every week. I also volunteered there.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I think so. Now every week when I go to the library to study, I can see a lot of children, although they are still a bit noisy. I believe this thing is always good. It symbolizes the hope of our motherland.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中“free book resorts”表达不准确,应使用“free book resources”或“free books”。建议用更自然的表达方式,并避免重复“often go”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I visit the library regularly because it offers free books and a comfortable environment for studying.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯,如“especially”前加“because”。同时,避免重复“often”。
Ví dụ: I usually read books related to my major and study here, especially because I need to prepare for exams.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但“basically”用词不够准确,建议用“usually”或“regularly”。可以稍微丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, I usually visited the children's library in our province every week and volunteered there as well.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中“this thing”表达不明确,建议用具体名词替代。句子结构稍显松散,建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I believe many Chinese children often visit libraries. When I study there weekly, I see many kids, although they can be noisy. This shows a positive sign for our country's future.
× The free book resorts and comfortable study environment here make me come here frequently.
✓ The free book resources and comfortable study environment here make me come here frequently.
原句中“resorts”应为“resources”,前者意为度假胜地,后者意为资源。此处应使用“resources”表示图书资源。
× I often come here to read some books related to my major and to study, especially when I need to prepare for some exams.
✓ I often come here to read books related to my major and to study, especially when I need to prepare for exams.
“some books”和“some exams”在此处不太合适,去掉“some”使表达更自然,表示泛指。
× I believe this thing is always good.
✓ I believe this is always good.
“this thing”表达不自然,直接用“this”更简洁且符合英语习惯。