Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且信息不连贯。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I seldom go to the library because my school library is often crowded and noisy. Therefore, I prefer to study at home where it is quieter.

Gợi ý: 回答较为清楚，但有语法错误和表达不自然的地方。建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用连词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually do my homework in the library because it is quiet and convenient. Besides, I prefer to attend online classes there since the free Wi-Fi helps me focus better.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，简洁明了地表达意思。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because my mother liked to borrow books and she always took me with her.

Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇使用错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用准确的词汇，避免重复，并用连词连接句子。

Ví dụ: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because there are many interesting books available for children to read.

× I seldom go to the library because it is cloudy, especially my school library it has.

✓ I seldom go to the library because it is cloudy, especially my school library has many people.

句子中“my school library it has”结构不正确，应该直接用“my school library has”来表达“我的学校图书馆有……”。“There be”结构错误，导致句子不通顺。

× Last set so it's difficult to find a quiet place to study, so that I prefer to study at home than library.

✓ Last seat so it's difficult to find a quiet place to study, so I prefer to study at home rather than at the library.

“Last set”应为“Last seat”，表示最后一个座位。比较结构中应使用“prefer to do A rather than do B”，且“library”前应加冠词“the”。

× Besides, I prefer to attend the online class in the library since it's free Wi-Fi, It make me convenient and focus.

✓ Besides, I prefer to attend online classes in the library since it has free Wi-Fi. It makes me feel convenient and focused.

“It make”应为“It makes”，主谓一致问题。表达“使我方便和专注”时，动词应使用正确形式，且“convenient”应改为“feel convenient”或用副词形式。

× Yes, because my mother like to go to the library to borrow the book and she always take me following.

✓ Yes, because my mother likes to go to the library to borrow books and she always takes me along.

“mother”是第三人称单数，动词应加-s，故“like”改为“likes”，“take”改为“takes”。“following”用法不当，应改为“along”。

× Yes, because my mother like to go to the library to borrow the book and she always take me following.

✓ Yes, because my mother likes to go to the library to borrow books and she always takes me along.

“the book”应为复数“books”，因为图书馆借阅通常是多本书。

× I think yes, because our library has marched books for each kid to read and the book is very interesting.

✓ I think yes, because our library has matched books for each kid to read and the books are very interesting.

“marched books”应为“matched books”，且“the book”应为复数“the books”，主谓一致。

× So I think the Chinese kid like to go to the library very much.

✓ So I think Chinese kids like to go to the library very much.

“kid”应为复数“kids”，因为指的是一类人群。