Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like "I enjoy" and use correct verb forms (e.g., "I enjoy walking" instead of "I enjoy to walk"). Also, use the correct term "cover" instead of "Cape" when referring to books. Keep your answer concise and natural, and limit it to about 4-5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because it's a quiet and peaceful place. I enjoy walking through the aisles and smelling the books. I especially like looking at the covers to decide which book I want to read.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, "a peace moment" should be "a peaceful moment," and "smelling the books" should be "smell the books." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Keep your sentences concise and avoid listing too many actions without clear connections.

Ví dụ: I usually visit the library to enjoy a peaceful moment during my day. I walk through the shelves and smell the books, which helps me decide which one to read. Then, I sit quietly to relax and read.

Gợi ý: Your answer provides good content but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "They started reading" should be "I started reading," and "Harry Potter's collection of books" is better as "the Harry Potter book series." Also, avoid redundancy like "begging her to buy me all Harry Potter books that I could see it on the shelves." Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural.

Ví dụ: I started reading when I was 10 years old, and one of my first passions was the Harry Potter book series. I remember asking my mom to take me to the library and hoping she would buy me the books I saw on the shelves.

Gợi ý: Your answer is honest and clear, which is good. However, you can improve by making your response more concise and natural. Instead of repeating "none," say it once. Also, you can politely state that you don't have enough information to answer the question without over-explaining.

Ví dụ: I'm Brazilian, and I don't have much experience with Chinese culture or friends, so I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library.

× Yes, it's actually one of my favorite places because it's very quiet and peaceful and I enjoy and I enjoy to walk through the library and smell the books.

✓ Yes, it's actually one of my favorite places because it's very quiet and peaceful and I enjoy walking through the library and smelling the books.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form (-ing) of the verb, not the infinitive 'to walk'. Therefore, 'enjoy to walk' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy walking'. Similarly, 'smell the books' should be 'smelling the books' to maintain parallel structure.

× Also, I really enjoy the part that I can see the Cape of the book and decide if I wanna read it.

✓ Also, I really enjoy the part where I can see the cover of the book and decide if I want to read it.

The word 'Cape' is incorrect; the correct word is 'cover' when referring to a book. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech. The phrase 'the part that I can see' should be 'the part where I can see' to correctly refer to the location or aspect.

× I usually go to the library to have a peace moment during my day so I normally just walk through the shelves and smelling the books and I like to see the covers so I can decide which one I read and just sit down, silence and breathe and read.

✓ I usually go to the library to have a peaceful moment during my day, so I normally just walk through the shelves and smell the books. I like to see the covers so I can decide which one to read and just sit down, be silent, breathe, and read.

'Peace moment' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'peaceful'. After 'walk through the shelves', the verb should be in base form 'smell' not 'smelling' because it follows 'just walk through... and'. Also, 'which one I read' should be 'which one to read' to express purpose. 'Silence' is a noun; the verb form 'be silent' is appropriate here.

× They started reading when I was 10 years old and one of my first passions was Harry Potter's collection of books.

✓ I started reading when I was 10 years old and one of my first passions was the Harry Potter collection of books.

The subject 'They' is incorrect here; it should be 'I' because the speaker is talking about themselves. Also, 'Harry Potter's collection of books' is better expressed as 'the Harry Potter collection of books' or 'the Harry Potter book series'.

× So I remember asking my mom to take me to the library and begging her to buy me all Harry Potter books that I could see it on the shelves.

✓ So I remember asking my mom to take me to the library and begging her to buy me all the Harry Potter books that I could see on the shelves.

The phrase 'that I could see it on the shelves' is incorrect because 'that' already refers to the books, so 'it' is redundant and should be removed. Also, 'all Harry Potter books' should be 'all the Harry Potter books' to specify the particular books.

× I am Brazilian so I don't know if Chinese kids go often to the library since I don't have any Chinese friends and none none of my family is from China.

✓ I am Brazilian, so I don't know if Chinese kids often go to the library since I don't have any Chinese friends and none of my family is from China.

The phrase 'go often to the library' is awkward; the adverb 'often' should be placed before the verb 'go'. Also, 'none none' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'none'. A comma is needed after 'Brazilian' to separate clauses.