Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I seldom go to library because I'm far from my home. I usually study at my home because it's very convenient and save time.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
It's various. I do a lot of things in the libraries, for example searching information which is useful in my study. What's more, I also write my homework there because the environment is quiet and very suitable to study.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, when I was kids I prefer to study at home because the library is far from my home and it's a waste of time when I went there.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, they think the library is very quiet and suitable to study. What's more, the library provides a lot of materials for there to searching.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法准确性,如冠词的使用("the library"),并避免语法错误("save time"应为"saves time")。此外,回答可以更自然简洁,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: To be honest, I seldom go to the library because it is far from my home. I usually study at home since it is more convenient and saves me time.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中应使用更准确的表达,如"various"而非"various",并注意动词形式("searching"应为"search")。此外,使用连接词时应更自然,避免生硬。
Ví dụ: I usually do various activities in the library. For example, I search for information that helps with my studies. Moreover, I often do my homework there because the environment is quiet and very suitable for studying.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如"when I was kids"应为"when I was a kid",时态使用不当("prefer"应为过去式"preferred")。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用。
Ví dụ: No, when I was a kid, I preferred to study at home because the library was far from my home and going there was a waste of time.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中应注意语法和表达的准确性,如"suitable to study"应为"suitable for studying","for there to searching"表达不自然,应改为"for searching there"。建议使用更地道的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they think it is very quiet and suitable for studying. Moreover, the library provides a lot of materials for searching there.
× I seldom go to library because I'm far from my home.
✓ I seldom go to the library because I'm far from my home.
在英语中,表示特定的地方如“library”前通常需要加定冠词“the”,表示特指某个图书馆。缺少冠词会导致表达不完整。
× I usually study at my home because it's very convenient and save time.
✓ I usually study at my home because it's very convenient and saves time.
主语是第三人称单数(it),谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“saves”,否则时态不一致。
× It's various.
✓ It's varied.
“various”是形容词,通常用来修饰名词,不能单独用作表语。此处应使用“varied”表示“多样的”,作为表语形容词。
× I do a lot of things in the libraries, for example searching information which is useful in my study.
✓ I do a lot of things in the library, for example searching information which is useful in my study.
此处指的是特定的图书馆,使用单数“library”更合适。复数形式“libraries”与上下文不符。
× for example searching information which is useful in my study.
✓ for example searching for information which is useful in my study.
动词“search”后面需要加介词“for”构成短语“search for”,表示“寻找”。缺少介词导致表达不完整。
× the library is quiet and very suitable to study.
✓ the library is quiet and very suitable for studying.
“suitable”后应接介词“for”加动名词形式,表示“适合做某事”,而不是“to study”。
× No, when I was kids I prefer to study at home because the library is far from my home and it's a waste of time when I went there.
✓ No, when I was a kid I preferred to study at home because the library was far from my home and it was a waste of time to go there.
“kids”应为单数“a kid”与“was”搭配;“prefer”应使用过去式“preferred”;“is”应改为过去式“was”;“went”应改为不定式“to go”以表达目的。
× the library provides a lot of materials for there to searching.
✓ the library provides a lot of materials for them to search.
“there”用错,应使用宾格代词“them”作介词宾语;“searching”应改为动词原形“search”与“to”搭配。