Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的原因，但语言稍显口语化且有语法错误，如“'cause”应避免使用，且句子结构可以更清晰。建议使用更正式的表达，并注意句子连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can study without distractions. Additionally, I enjoy borrowing books since it is more economical than buying them.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“study my subject from schools and library”不够准确。建议简洁明了地表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually study my school subjects in the library because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate better.

Gợi ý: 回答内容基本完整，但时态使用不当，如“take”应为“took”，且“comics book”应为“comic books”。建议注意时态一致性和名词复数形式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents often took me to the library because they wanted to finish their work there, and while they were working, I would read comic books.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够准确，如“state of point”应为“point of view”，且句子较长且口语化。建议使用更正式的表达，简化句子结构，并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: In my point of view, Chinese children do not often go to the library because they face a lot of pressure from school and home, leaving them little time to visit other places, even the library which could help them study.

× I also like borrowing books from the library, its cheaper than I buy them.

✓ I also like borrowing books from the library; it's cheaper than buying them.

这里的错误是单复数问题，'its' 应为 'it's'（it is 的缩写），并且比较结构中应使用动名词形式 'buying'，而不是 'I buy'。建议使用动名词形式来表达比较。

× I would usually study my subject from schools and library 'cause it's very quiet over there, it can make me focus.

✓ I usually study my subjects at school and in the library because it's very quiet there, which helps me focus.

这里的介词使用不当，'from schools and library' 应改为 'at school and in the library'，表示地点。'cause' 应改为 'because'，更正式。'it can make me focus' 应改为 'which helps me focus'，使句子更通顺。

× My parents often take me to the library.

✓ My parents often took me to the library.

这里时态错误，句子描述过去的习惯动作，应使用过去时 'took' 而不是现在时 'take'。

× when they are working I will go read comics book.

✓ when they are working I will go read comic books.

'comics book' 是单复数错误，正确应为复数 'comic books'，表示多本漫画书。

× In my state of point, I don't really think so 'cause in my school there's too much grade pressure and pressure from their home, so they don't have much time to go to somewhere else, even if it's the library which can help them to study.

✓ In my point of view, I don't really think so because in my school there's too much grade pressure and pressure from home, so they don't have much time to go somewhere else, even if it's the library which can help them study.

'state of point' 应为 'point of view'，是固定搭配。'pressure from their home' 中 'their' 不合适，应直接用 'pressure from home'。'go to somewhere else' 中 'to' 多余，应去掉。'help them to study' 中 'to' 可省略，更自然。