Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'I will more concentrate' and 'I always miss my friends there to have a discussions.' Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment where I can concentrate on my studies. Moreover, I meet my friends there to discuss our assignments and share ideas.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several errors and unclear phrases, such as 'copies my assignments' and 'using smoke and other resources.' Make sure to use correct verb forms and clarify what resources you use. Also, explain how these activities help you improve your skills with linking words.

Ví dụ: I usually copy my assignments in the library and use books and online resources to research information. This helps me improve my vocabulary and express my ideas more clearly.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains many grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'scoring to the library' and 'I have UH becomes a diligent students.' Try to use simple, correct sentences and avoid filler words. Also, organize your ideas logically with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been going to the library since I was a kid. My parents took me there to encourage my reading habits, which helped me develop a love for books. Thanks to them, I became a diligent student, and I hope to pass these good study habits to my own children in the future.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and awkward phrases like 'I know them a very take a attention to the studies versions.' Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library. Many families encourage their children to study there because it provides a good environment for learning.

× Absolutely, I often go to the library because it offers a quiet environment which I will more concentrate on my studies.

✓ Absolutely, I often go to the library because it offers a quiet environment where I can concentrate more on my studies.

The phrase 'I will more concentrate' is incorrect because 'concentrate' should be used with a modal verb 'can' to express ability, and 'more' should come after the verb. Also, 'which' is better replaced by 'where' to refer to the environment.

× Additionally, I always miss my friends there to have a discussions about our assignments so we can share our ideas.

✓ Additionally, I always meet my friends there to have discussions about our assignments so we can share our ideas.

The word 'miss' is incorrect in this context; 'meet' is appropriate for meeting friends. Also, 'a discussions' is incorrect because 'discussions' is plural and should not have the article 'a'.

× I usually copies my assignments in the library by using smoke and other resources to research information, so it's more effective to improve my vocabulary and express my ideas more clearly.

✓ I usually copy my assignments in the library by using books and other resources to research information, so it's more effective to improve my vocabulary and express my ideas more clearly.

The verb 'copies' should be 'copy' to agree with the singular subject 'I'. Also, 'smoke' is likely a typo or incorrect word; 'books' fits the context better.

× Definitely, I have been scoring to the library since I was a kid.

✓ Definitely, I have been going to the library since I was a kid.

The phrase 'have been scoring' is incorrect; the correct present perfect continuous form is 'have been going' to indicate an action continuing from the past to present.

× My parents always took me there to encourage my reading habits, which helps me develop a love for habits for books.

✓ My parents always took me there to encourage my reading habits, which helped me develop a love for books.

The phrase 'a love for habits for books' is incorrect and redundant. It should be 'a love for books'. Also, 'helps' should be 'helped' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I have UH becomes a diligent students and I hope to pass this good study habits onto my own children in the future.

✓ I have become a diligent student and I hope to pass these good study habits onto my own children in the future.

'becomes' should be 'become' after 'have'. 'students' should be singular 'student' to agree with 'a'. 'this' should be 'these' to agree with plural 'habits'.

× Yes, I always say the Chinese kids often go to the library.

✓ Yes, I always say that Chinese kids often go to the library.

The sentence needs 'that' to introduce the clause properly. Also, 'the Chinese kids' is better as 'Chinese kids' for general statements.

× I know them a very take a attention to the studies versions.

✓ I know they pay a lot of attention to their studies.

'I know them' is incorrect; 'I know they' is correct as the subject. 'take a attention' should be 'pay attention'. 'studies versions' is unclear and corrected to 'their studies'.

× That's why the most family Chinese will take their kids into the library to have a study well.

✓ That's why most Chinese families take their kids to the library to study well.

'the most family Chinese' is incorrect; it should be 'most Chinese families'. 'have a study well' is incorrect; 'to study well' is correct.