Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I love reading books' twice. Also, use correct verb forms and articles, for example, say 'Most books I read are about historic moments and freedom fighting.' Try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading. Most of the books I read are about historic events and freedom fighters. Additionally, I like novels written by famous poets, which inspire me a lot.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. For example, explain what 'SEM' means or avoid unclear phrases like 'books which allow.' Also, avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: In the library, I usually discuss seminar topics with my friends and read books. For instance, I enjoy reading about freedom fighters, historical events, and adventure stories. These activities help me learn and relax.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and informal expressions. Use past tense correctly and avoid repeating 'when I was a kid.' Also, try to provide a more positive and structured response with linking words to explain your change in attitude.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I did not like reading books. However, as I grew up, I realized the importance of books and started visiting the library regularly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is vague and contains unclear phrases like 'morning practice way.' Try to give a more precise and natural response. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and avoid grammatical errors. Also, say 'the library' instead of 'library.'

Ví dụ: As far as I know, Chinese kids do not often go to the library because they usually learn through traditional methods and morning practice sessions rather than reading books.

× Yes, I do often go to the library to read books and I love reading books.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to read books and I love reading books.

The phrase 'do often go' is grammatically correct but sounds unnatural. The adverb 'often' should be placed before the main verb 'go' without 'do' for smoother and more natural English usage.

× Most books which I read was about the historic moments and also the freedom fighting books.

✓ Most books which I read were about historic moments and also freedom fighting books.

The subject 'books' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was' to maintain subject-verb agreement. Also, 'historic moments' and 'freedom fighting books' do not need 'the' before them here.

× Most books which I read was about the historic moments and also the freedom fighting books.

✓ Most books which I read were about historic moments and also freedom fighting books.

The adjective 'historic' is correct, but 'the' before 'historic moments' and 'freedom fighting books' is unnecessary here as these are general references, not specific ones.

× I also love the novels written by famous poets.

✓ I also love novels written by famous poets.

The definite article 'the' before 'novels' is unnecessary when speaking generally about novels by famous poets.

× I usually discuss with my friends about the topics of the SEM as well as read the books which allow.

✓ I usually discuss the topics of the SEM with my friends as well as read the books that are allowed.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'with' after it when the object is mentioned directly. Also, 'which allow' is incomplete; it should be 'that are allowed' to clarify meaning.

× Most probably I read books like freedom fighters, historical events and together with some adventures.

✓ Most probably I read books about freedom fighters, historical events, and some adventures.

The phrase 'books like freedom fighters' is incorrect; it should be 'books about freedom fighters'. Also, 'together with some adventures' is awkward and unnecessary here.

× I also love adventures and the poets who are adventures.

✓ I also love adventure and poets who are adventurous.

'Adventures' as a noun is plural but here 'adventure' as an uncountable noun fits better. Also, 'poets who are adventures' is incorrect; it should be 'poets who are adventurous' using the adjective form.

× To be honest, I don't been to a library when I was a kid because when I was a kid I don't like reading books and I hate books.

✓ To be honest, I didn't go to a library when I was a kid because I didn't like reading books and I hated books then.

The phrase 'don't been' is incorrect; the past tense negative form is 'didn't go'. Also, 'don't like' and 'hate' should be in past tense 'didn't like' and 'hated' to match the time frame 'when I was a kid'.

× But when I grow up only I know the importance of book, so that's all.

✓ But when I grew up, I realized the importance of books, so that's all.

The phrase 'when I grow up' should be in past tense 'when I grew up' to match the past context. Also, 'know' should be 'realized' to indicate past understanding. 'Book' should be plural 'books'.

× In my knowledge, I don't think that Chinese kids often go to library because they are getting knowledge by morning practice way, not by any reading method and they are using their traditional methods for getting knowledge.

✓ To my knowledge, I don't think that Chinese kids often go to the library because they gain knowledge through morning practice, not by reading methods, and they use traditional methods to gain knowledge.

The phrase 'go to library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'getting knowledge by morning practice way' is awkward; it should be 'gain knowledge through morning practice'. Consistency in verb forms and article usage improves clarity.