Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Due to my exams, I usually prefer going to the library when I was in there. I am trying to be highly focused on the tasks and trying to come up with a solution as much as possible.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
In the library I usually do researches about the problems I encounter, except that I usually sleep in there so.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
I rarely go to library when I was a kid because due to my exams.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I think they live in the library. They don't just go there, they live in the library. Stay significantly are in the library to do all the things.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızda zaman uyumsuzluğu ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "When I was in there" ifadesi anlamı karıştırıyor. Ayrıca, cümleniz biraz karmaşık ve doğal değil. Daha net ve doğrudan cevap vermeye çalışın. Örneğin, geçmiş ve şimdiki zamanları doğru kullanın ve cümlenizi daha akıcı hale getirin.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library, especially during exam periods. I find it easier to concentrate there and complete my tasks efficiently.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve anlam açısından sorunlar var. "Do researches" yerine "do research" kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümleniz sonu tamamlanmamış ve doğal değil. Cümlenizi tamamlayarak ve daha açık ifadeler kullanarak geliştirin.
Ví dụ: In the library, I usually do research on topics I find challenging. Sometimes, I also take short breaks to rest if I feel tired.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Zaman uyumu hatası var; geçmiş zaman kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, "because due to" ifadesi yanlıştır, sadece "because" veya "due to" kullanılmalı. Cümlenizi daha açık ve doğru yapıya kavuşturun.
Ví dụ: I rarely went to the library when I was a kid because I was usually busy studying for exams.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Cümleniz anlam açısından karışık ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. "Stay significantly are in the library" ifadesi anlamsız. Daha açık, mantıklı ve doğal cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, abartılı ifadelerden kaçının.
Ví dụ: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library to study and do their homework because education is very important to them.
× Due to my exams, I usually prefer going to the library when I was in there.
✓ Due to my exams, I usually preferred going to the library when I was there.
The sentence mixes present tense 'usually prefer' with past time reference 'when I was there'. To maintain tense consistency, 'prefer' should be changed to past tense 'preferred'.
× I am trying to be highly focused on the tasks and trying to come up with a solution as much as possible.
✓ I try to be highly focused on the tasks and try to come up with a solution as much as possible.
Using 'am trying' suggests a current ongoing action, but the context implies a habitual action, so simple present 'try' is more appropriate. Also, repeating 'trying' is redundant; using 'try' twice is clearer.
× In the library I usually do researches about the problems I encounter, except that I usually sleep in there so.
✓ In the library I usually do research about the problems I encounter, except that I usually sleep there sometimes.
The word 'research' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'researches'. Also, 'in there' is better as 'there' and 'so' is unclear; 'sometimes' clarifies the meaning.
× I rarely go to library when I was a kid because due to my exams.
✓ I rarely went to the library when I was a kid because of my exams.
The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the library'. 'Because due to' is redundant; 'because of' is correct.
× I rarely go to library when I was a kid because due to my exams.
✓ I rarely went to the library when I was a kid because of my exams.
The phrase 'to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'.
× I think they live in the library.
✓ I think they live in the library.
This sentence is grammatically correct and matches the present tense context.
× They don't just go there, they live in the library.
✓ They don't just go there; they live in the library.
The original sentence is a run-on sentence. Using a semicolon or separating into two sentences improves clarity.
× Stay significantly are in the library to do all the things.
✓ They stay in the library most of the time to do all their tasks.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Correcting the sentence structure and word choice clarifies the meaning.