Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
No, I am not often go to the library because I don't like to read book since I was a child.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Actually I said before I am not very interesting about books, but in library if they have a coffee shop in the library I will use to drink a Coco, a cup of Washington coffee or a cheesecake.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Umm, I cannot remember. Like I cannot remember. I did. I have go to the library before when I was a child, but if I went I would say yeah. I, I don't know, yes, maybe.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Absolutely yes, because Chinese children and Chinese students is very hardworking, like all the day they are doing homework, doing tests, reading books. So yes.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误,如“am not often go”应改为“do not often go”。此外,表达不够自然,建议使用更地道的表达方式,并且回答可以更简洁直接。
Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because I have never enjoyed reading books since I was a child.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不准确,如“interesting”应为“interested”,“use to drink”应为“usually drink”。句子结构混乱,建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Actually, I'm not very interested in books, but if the library has a coffee shop, I usually enjoy drinking a cup of coffee or having a cheesecake there.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏条理,重复且语法错误较多,如“have go”应为“have gone”。建议直接回答问题,避免重复和犹豫,使用简单明了的句子。
Ví dụ: I can't remember clearly, but I think I went to the library a few times when I was a child.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“students is”应为“students are”。表达较为简单,建议使用更多连接词和具体细节,使回答更丰富和连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they are very hardworking. They spend most of their day doing homework, taking tests, and reading books there.
× No, I am not often go to the library because I don't like to read book since I was a child.
✓ No, I do not often go to the library because I haven't liked to read books since I was a child.
句子中使用了错误的时态和结构。'am not often go'是不正确的表达,应该用一般现在时的否定形式'do not often go'。另外,'since I was a child'表示从过去持续到现在,应该用现在完成时'haven't liked'。'book'应为复数形式'books'。
× Actually I said before I am not very interesting about books, but in library if they have a coffee shop in the library I will use to drink a Coco, a cup of Washington coffee or a cheesecake.
✓ Actually, I said before I am not very interested in books, but if the library has a coffee shop, I will drink a cocoa, a cup of Washington coffee, or eat a cheesecake.
'interesting'是形容词,表示令人感兴趣的,应该用过去分词形式'interested'来表示人的感受。'interesting about'搭配错误,正确搭配是'interested in'。'use to drink'错误,应直接用动词原形。'Coco'应为'cocoa'。句子结构也需调整使其更通顺。
× I did. I have go to the library before when I was a child, but if I went I would say yeah.
✓ I did. I have gone to the library before when I was a child, but if I went, I would say yeah.
'have go'是不正确的现在完成时形式,正确形式是'have gone'。另外,句子中需要在'if I went'后加逗号以符合英语书写规范。
× Chinese children and Chinese students is very hardworking, like all the day they are doing homework, doing tests, reading books.
✓ Chinese children and Chinese students are very hardworking; they spend all day doing homework, taking tests, and reading books.
主语是复数'children and students',谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。'like all the day'表达不自然,改为'they spend all day'更合适。动词形式也需调整以符合语法。