Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by making it more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific examples using linking words to make it coherent. Avoid redundancy like 'maybe' and 'or any other story books'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading various genres such as fiction, science, crime, and thrillers. Additionally, I like to browse magazines available there to stay updated on different topics.

Gợi ý: Your answer covers the main points but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition like 'go to the library' twice. Also, use singular/plural forms correctly, e.g., 'pending work' instead of 'pending works'.

Ví dụ: I usually go to the library to complete my assignments and homework because it offers a quiet environment free from distractions. Moreover, I read novels and storybooks there to improve my vocabulary.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and making it more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the routine. Also, replace 'your wish' with 'our choice' to maintain consistency.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to go to the library regularly as a child. We had a fixed timetable that required us to visit the library daily, choose a novel or storybook of our choice, and read it for an hour.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrasing. Avoid vague expressions like 'not to the stereotypical' and unsupported generalisations. Instead, give a clear opinion with reasons or examples, and use appropriate linking words.

Ví dụ: I think many Chinese kids often visit the library because education is highly valued in their culture. Therefore, they tend to spend time reading and studying in such places.

× I go to the library or to complete my assignments or work on my homework.

✓ I go to the library to complete my assignments or work on my homework.

The phrase 'or to complete' is incorrect here because 'or' is used to connect two alternatives, but the sentence intends to express purpose. The correct form is 'to complete' without 'or'. Using 'or' here causes confusion in sentence structure.

× so I often go there just to complete my pending works and read other novels and story books just to enhance my vocabulary.

✓ so I often go there just to complete my pending work and read other novels and story books just to enhance my vocabulary.

The word 'works' is incorrect in this context because 'work' as a noun referring to tasks or assignments is uncountable and should be singular. Using 'works' implies multiple separate pieces, which is not appropriate here.

× We had a dedicated timetable in our everyday schedule where we have to go to the library and pick up a novel of your wish or a storybook of your wish and read it for an hour.

✓ We had a dedicated timetable in our everyday schedule where we had to go to the library and pick up a novel of our wish or a storybook of our wish and read it for an hour.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect because the speaker is referring to their own experience using 'we'. The correct pronoun should be 'our' to maintain consistency and clarity in the sentence.

× Not to the stereotypical, but I do believe that the Chinese people have more knowledge.

✓ Not stereotypically, but I do believe that the Chinese people have more knowledge.

The phrase 'Not to the stereotypical' is incorrect because 'stereotypical' is an adjective and cannot be used with 'to' in this way. The correct adverb form is 'stereotypically' to modify the sentence properly.