Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
No, I don't know how I do not go to the library because I do not have a library, a common library close to my house and I prefer to to browse online to check any articles I want to know about online at my convenience. Convenience because I do not have enough time to go to the library. I have two kids and also.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually I usually read in the library I likes. I like the library because it is very quiet and it saves me from distraction.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, I did not go to the library when I was working because I spent before my reading at home and you do not have a Public Library to the house.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Well, I can't say about that because I live in Nigeria and I don't know if Chinese keeps off me going to the library.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to give a direct response first, then explain with clear and concise reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating words and keep your answer within 5 sentences.
Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my house. Instead, I prefer browsing articles online since it's more convenient for me. Also, I have two kids, so it's hard to find time to visit the library.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer is short and has some repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words to make your answer more coherent.
Ví dụ: I usually read books when I go to the library because it is very quiet there. This quiet environment helps me focus and avoid distractions, which makes reading more enjoyable.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear and direct response, then explain with specific reasons using proper sentence structure and linking words.
Ví dụ: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because there was no public library near my home. Therefore, I used to read books at home instead.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a polite and clear response, explaining your lack of knowledge with proper grammar and linking words.
Ví dụ: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I live in Nigeria and don't have much information about their habits.
× No, I don't know how I do not go to the library because I do not have a library, a common library close to my house and I prefer to to browse online to check any articles I want to know about online at my convenience.
✓ No, I don't go to the library because I do not have a common library close to my house, and I prefer to browse online to check any articles I want to know about at my convenience.
The phrase 'I don't know how I do not go to the library' is incorrect and confusing. The correct expression is 'I don't go to the library'. Also, 'a library, a common library' is redundant; 'a common library' suffices. The preposition 'to' before 'browse' is unnecessary and should be removed. The phrase 'at my convenience' should be placed at the end for clarity.
× I usually I usually read in the library I likes.
✓ I usually read in the library. I like it because it is very quiet and it saves me from distraction.
The verb 'likes' is incorrect for the first person singular subject 'I'. The correct form is 'like'. Also, the sentence is repetitive and lacks clarity; splitting into two sentences improves readability.
× No, I did not go to the library when I was working because I spent before my reading at home and you do not have a Public Library to the house.
✓ No, I did not go to the library when I was working because I used to do my reading at home and there was no public library near my house.
The phrase 'I spent before my reading' is incorrect; 'I used to do my reading' is appropriate. 'You do not have a Public Library to the house' is incorrect; it should be 'there was no public library near my house' to indicate absence in the past.
× Well, I can't say about that because I live in Nigeria and I don't know if Chinese keeps off me going to the library.
✓ Well, I can't say about that because I live in Nigeria and I don't know if Chinese kids often go to the library.
The phrase 'Chinese keeps off me going to the library' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely about whether Chinese children often go to the library. 'Chinese kids often go to the library' is the correct expression. Also, 'keeps off me' is an incorrect pronoun and verb usage.