Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「rivalry」は「library」の誤りと思われます。文を簡潔にし、正しい単語を使い、論理的に繋げることが重要です。

Ví dụ: I don't often go to the library, but I sometimes visit the one near my house when I have exams. It helps me concentrate and feel relaxed, which improves my study efficiency.

Gợi ý: 内容は良いですが、「glamour」の使い方が不適切です。より適切な語彙を使い、文を簡潔にし、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げましょう。

Ví dụ: When I visit the library, I usually read English articles from America or England because they help me learn new vocabulary and understand foreign cultures better.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。「rivalry」は「library」の誤りです。文を短くし、過去形を正しく使い、明確に答えましょう。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I didn't like going to the library when I was a child. I preferred playing sports and talking with my friends instead of studying in a quiet place.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りと単語の誤用（pleasured, rivalry）が目立ちます。正しい単語を使い、文を簡潔にし、理由を明確に述べましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think many Chinese students often go to the library because their parents and schools encourage them to study hard for the university entrance exams, which are very challenging.

× Not really, I really go to the library.

✓ Not really, I don't really go to the library.

The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'do' for negation in the present simple tense. In English, to make a negative statement in the present simple, 'do not' or 'don't' is required before the base verb.

× when I have exam, I sometimes go to the rivalry near my house to prepare my exam

✓ when I have an exam, I sometimes go to the library near my house to prepare for my exam

The noun 'exam' is countable and requires an article 'an' before it. Also, 'rivalry' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'library'. Additionally, the phrase 'prepare my exam' should be 'prepare for my exam' because 'prepare' is followed by 'for' when indicating the object of preparation.

× So moreover it's helped me to feel relaxed so that's why I sometimes go.

✓ Moreover, it helps me to feel relaxed, so that's why I sometimes go.

The sentence mixes past tense 'it's helped' with present tense context. Since the action is habitual, present tense 'helps' is appropriate. Also, 'so moreover' is redundant; 'Moreover' alone suffices.

× So let's say when I visit the library, I usually read the English articles from America or England because it's really helped me to learn the vocabulary words and glamour from the book and it gives me a chance to know the foreign cultures.

✓ So let's say when I visit the library, I usually read English articles from America or England because they really help me to learn vocabulary words and grammar from the books, and they give me a chance to learn about foreign cultures.

The phrase 'it's really helped' incorrectly uses past tense 'helped' for a habitual action; present tense 'help' is correct. 'Glamour' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'grammar'. Also, 'the vocabulary words' and 'the book' should be pluralized as 'vocabulary words' and 'books' to match the context. 'Know the foreign cultures' is better expressed as 'learn about foreign cultures'.

× Uh, to be honest, when I was a child, I hate going to the rivalry at that time, I didn't enjoy reading books and studying out there quite and calm environment that time I would prefer playing sports or talking with my friends.

✓ Uh, to be honest, when I was a child, I hated going to the library at that time. I didn't enjoy reading books and studying in a quiet and calm environment. At that time, I preferred playing sports or talking with my friends.

The verb 'hate' should be in past tense 'hated' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Rivalry' is incorrect; it should be 'library'. The phrase 'studying out there quite and calm environment' is ungrammatical; it should be 'studying in a quiet and calm environment'. Also, 'would prefer' is better as 'preferred' to maintain past tense consistency.

× So that's why I didn't go to the.

✓ So that's why I didn't go to the library.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the object after 'to the'. Adding 'library' completes the sentence logically and grammatically.

× Yes, I think so because Chinese student are are also pleasured by parents, schools or even their relatives because they have to take Chinese university exam.

✓ Yes, I think so because Chinese students are also pressured by parents, schools, or even their relatives because they have to take the Chinese university exam.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. The word 'pleasured' is incorrect; the correct word is 'pressured'. Also, 'Chinese university exam' needs the definite article 'the' before it.

× It was really tough and demanding for them so that's why they often go to the rivalry.

✓ It is really tough and demanding for them, so that's why they often go to the library.

The verb tense should be present 'is' to match the habitual action. 'Rivalry' is incorrect; it should be 'library'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.