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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yet I often go to the library. Actually, I live in my truck is near the University of Tokyo, and I'm and I'm alumni of the university. I often use the university. I often use their libraries.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

Well, when I go live all day I often study English. Additionally, since I work as a lawyer I often legal periodicals. Recently I read.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Actually, I rarely used libraries when I was young. Since my hometown is in a rural area, there are no libraries If I had if I use a library, I had to go to the libraries in the next.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Well, I think children in China often use libraries to study. Most library operates a study room for children. Many children use their and.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「Yet」や「I live in my truck is near the University of Tokyo」などの表現は意味が通じにくいです。より自然な英語表現を使い、簡潔に答えることを心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because I live near the University of Tokyo, and as an alumnus, I have access to their libraries.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば「I often legal periodicals」や「Recently I read」など、動詞や目的語が抜けています。文を完結させ、具体的な活動内容を明確に述べるようにしましょう。

Ví dụ: When I go to the library, I usually study English. Additionally, as a lawyer, I often read legal periodicals to keep myself updated.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 文法的な誤りと不自然な表現があります。例えば「If I had if I use a library, I had to go to the libraries in the next」は意味が不明瞭です。過去の状況を明確にし、正しい文法で表現しましょう。

Ví dụ: Actually, I rarely used libraries when I was young because my hometown was in a rural area without any libraries. If I wanted to use one, I had to go to a library in the neighboring town.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 文が途中で終わっていたり、文法的な誤りがあります。例えば「Most library operates a study room for children」では単数・複数の一致が間違っています。文を完結させ、正しい文法で話しましょう。

Ví dụ: Well, I think children in China often use libraries to study. Most libraries have study rooms specifically for children, and many kids use these facilities regularly.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect conjunction use

× Yet I often go to the library.

I often go to the library.

'Yet' is incorrectly used at the beginning of the sentence here. It is a conjunction that typically connects two contrasting clauses, but in this context, it is unnecessary and causes confusion. Removing 'Yet' makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

Sentence structure errors

× Actually, I live in my truck is near the University of Tokyo, and I'm and I'm alumni of the university.

Actually, I live in a truck near the University of Tokyo, and I'm an alumnus of the university.

The original sentence has a run-on structure and incorrect article usage. 'I live in my truck is near...' is incorrect; it should be 'I live in a truck near...'. Also, 'I'm and I'm alumni' is repetitive and 'alumni' is plural; the singular form 'alumnus' is appropriate here. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

Sentence structure errors

× I often use the university.

I often use the university's facilities.

The sentence 'I often use the university.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'facilities' clarifies what is being used, making the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

Sentence structure errors

× I often use their libraries.

I often use their libraries.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

Sentence structure errors

× Well, when I go live all day I often study English.

Well, when I go there, I often study English all day.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks clarity. 'When I go live all day' is incorrect. Adding 'there' clarifies the location, and placing 'all day' at the end improves sentence flow and meaning.

Sentence structure errors

× Additionally, since I work as a lawyer I often legal periodicals.

Additionally, since I work as a lawyer, I often read legal periodicals.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'read' which is necessary to complete the meaning. Adding 'read' corrects the sentence structure.

Sentence structure errors

× Recently I read.

Recently, I have been reading them.

The sentence 'Recently I read.' is incomplete and vague. Adding 'have been reading them' clarifies the action and connects it to the previous sentence about legal periodicals.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Since my hometown is in a rural area, there are no libraries If I had if I use a library, I had to go to the libraries in the next.

Since my hometown is in a rural area, there are no libraries. If I wanted to use a library, I had to go to the libraries in the next town.

The original sentence has multiple issues: missing punctuation, incorrect conditional form, and missing words. Splitting into two sentences improves clarity. 'If I had if I use a library' is incorrect; it should be 'If I wanted to use a library'. Also, 'in the next' is incomplete; adding 'town' completes the phrase.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Most library operates a study room for children.

Most libraries operate study rooms for children.

'Library' should be plural 'libraries' to match 'most'. Also, 'a study room' should be plural 'study rooms' to agree with 'most libraries'. This corrects subject-verb agreement and noun number.

Sentence structure errors

× Many children use their and.

Many children use them.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Use their and' is incorrect. Replacing it with 'use them' refers back to the study rooms and completes the sentence logically.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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