Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'there is no updating' nên được sửa thành 'it is not updated'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó dùng các câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because there are none near my home. Also, the school library is old and not well maintained, so I prefer studying elsewhere.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó dùng các chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý. Tránh dùng các cụm từ như 'I think' khi bạn có thể chắc chắn. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I rarely visit the library, but when I do, I usually look for books or documents related to my studies. The last time I went was about two years ago.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'since I was tried' nên là 'since I was young' và 'watching televisions' nên là 'watching television'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because there were none in my area. Also, I preferred watching television to reading books at that time.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'this day' nên là 'these days' và câu cuối chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh nói lan man và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure about Chinese children, but Vietnamese kids don't often go to the library these days because technology allows them to read books at home easily.

× Or maybe I do not know about its existence and the library in my school it is too old and I don't like it because there is no updating.

✓ Or maybe I do not know about its existence, and the library in my school is too old and I don't like it because it is not updated.

The phrase 'there is no updating' is incorrect; it should be 'it is not updated' to describe the state of the library. Also, 'the library in my school it is too old' has redundant subject 'it'; it should be 'the library in my school is too old.' This corrects singular/plural and sentence structure issues.

× But I think that I mostly go to the library to find the books that I need or some documents.

✓ But I think that I mostly go to the library to find the books that I need or some documents.

No correction needed here as 'books' and 'documents' are correctly pluralized.

× No, I didn't. I don't know why, but I think that since I was tried, there was no libraries in the place where I lived and I'm not a bookworm at that time and I would prefer watching televisions rather than going to the library.

✓ No, I didn't. I don't know why, but I think that since I was a child, there were no libraries in the place where I lived, and I wasn't a bookworm at that time and I would prefer watching television rather than going to the library.

'Since I was tried' is incorrect; it should be 'since I was a child.' 'There was no libraries' is wrong because 'libraries' is plural; it should be 'there were no libraries.' 'Televisions' should be singular 'television' when referring to the activity of watching TV.

× I would prefer watching televisions rather than going to the library.

✓ I would prefer watching television rather than going to the library.

The word 'television' is uncountable when referring to the activity of watching TV, so it should not be pluralized as 'televisions.'

× I'm a Vietnamese so I don't know much about the Chinese kids, but when it comes to Vietnamese children, I don't think that they have the habit of going to the library so frequently this day because the advancements of technology so they can stay at home and reading books without.

✓ I'm Vietnamese, so I don't know much about Chinese kids, but when it comes to Vietnamese children, I don't think that they have the habit of going to the library so frequently these days because of the advancements in technology, so they can stay at home and read books without going out.

'I'm a Vietnamese' should be 'I'm Vietnamese' as nationality adjectives do not take an article. 'Chinese kids' is correct plural. 'This day' should be 'these days' to indicate current times. 'Advancements of technology' should be 'advancements in technology.' The sentence was incomplete and needed completion for clarity.

× ...so they can stay at home and reading books without.

✓ ...so they can stay at home and read books without going out.

After 'can,' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'reading' should be 'read.' The sentence was incomplete and needed 'without going out' to complete the thought.