Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific reasons or details. Avoid filler phrases like 'I cannot say' and repeated words. Also, use correct prepositions and articles, for example, 'once every two months' instead of 'once in a two months'.

Ví dụ: I usually go to the library about once every two months. This is mainly because of my family's tradition of spending time there together and immersing ourselves in books.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid filler phrases like 'I mean' and incorrect plural forms. Be more concise and precise.

Ví dụ: In the library, I mainly read books and explore new genres that interest me. Moreover, libraries motivate me by offering a wide range of topics and insights beyond just reading.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but is affected by grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct articles and plural forms, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went to the library as a child. It was my favourite place to spend spare time or hang out with friends because it was quiet and comfortable, allowing me to focus and gain knowledge.

Gợi ý: Your answer is honest but could be more structured and grammatically correct. Use linking words to organise your ideas clearly. Avoid filler phrases and improve sentence fluency.

Ví dụ: I am not Chinese, so I cannot speak for Chinese children. However, from my experience with South Korean kids, they often visit libraries when they are young, around 10 or 11 years old. But as they grow older, their extracurricular activities increase, leaving them less time to go to the library.

× I guess libraries is such a place that really gives you a lot of motivations and a lot of insights because you can not only read the books itself themselves, but you can also see a lot of genres and topics out there.

✓ I guess libraries are such places that really give you a lot of motivation and a lot of insights because you can not only read the books themselves, but you can also see a lot of genres and topics out there.

The subject 'libraries' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'libraries' refers to multiple places, so 'such places' is correct instead of 'such a place'. 'Motivations' should be singular 'motivation' as it is an uncountable noun in this context. 'Books itself themselves' is incorrect; 'books' is plural, so 'themselves' is correct and 'itself' should be removed.

× I often go to the library because I'm not a big fan of books. But I guess like once in a two months, I guess it's mainly because of my family's tradition.

✓ I often go to the library because I'm not a big fan of books. But I guess like once every two months, I guess it's mainly because of my family's tradition.

The phrase 'once in a two months' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'once every two months' to indicate frequency. This is a common plural expression for time intervals.

× when there was spare times or I was hanging out with my friends.

✓ when there was spare time or I was hanging out with my friends.

The phrase 'spare times' is incorrect because 'time' in this context is an uncountable noun and should be singular 'spare time'.

× I really cannot answer to that question, but reflecting on South Korean kids,

✓ I really cannot answer that question, but reflecting on South Korean kids,

The verb 'answer' does not require the preposition 'to' when followed directly by the object 'that question'. The correct form is 'answer that question'.

× they often have less times and they cannot really go to library often.

✓ they often have less time and they cannot really go to the library often.

'Times' should be 'time' because 'time' is uncountable in this context. Also, 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'.