Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'before some time to till now' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have recently started going to the library for my IELTS preparation because it offers a quiet and peaceful atmosphere, which is ideal for studying.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and improve grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about your activities.

Ví dụ: Currently, I use the library to practice reading and listening for my IELTS exam since it provides a quiet and peaceful environment that helps me concentrate.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Be direct and use clear sentences. Avoid contradictory statements and use linking words to explain your reasons.

Ví dụ: No, I did not go to the library as a child because I could manage my homework and reading at home easily since the workload was not very difficult then.

Gợi ý: Avoid vague statements and improve sentence structure. Clearly state your lack of knowledge and then give a general opinion with proper linking words.

Ví dụ: I am from India, so I don't know much about Chinese children. However, I believe that children everywhere often visit libraries because they offer a variety of books and a good place to read and learn.

× Yes, before some time to till now I've started going to library for my IELTS preparation because library has good atmosphere of quietness and peaceful so it is the best place to do study or read something.

✓ Yes, from some time ago until now I've started going to the library for my IELTS preparation because the library has a good atmosphere of quietness and peacefulness, so it is the best place to study or read something.

The sentence misses the definite article 'the' before 'library' and 'atmosphere'. Also, 'peaceful' should be 'peacefulness' to match the noun form. Using 'the' is necessary when referring to a specific place or thing, like 'the library'.

× Yes, before some time to till now I've started going to library for my IELTS preparation because library has good atmosphere of quietness and peaceful so it is the best place to do study or read something.

✓ Yes, from some time ago until now I've started going to the library for my IELTS preparation because the library has a good atmosphere of quietness and peacefulness, so it is the best place to study or read something.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' and 'atmosphere' because they refer to specific entities. Omitting 'the' makes the sentence grammatically incorrect.

× Yes, before some time to till now I've started going to library for my IELTS preparation because library has good atmosphere of quietness and peaceful so it is the best place to do study or read something.

✓ Yes, from some time ago until now I've started going to the library for my IELTS preparation because the library has a good atmosphere of quietness and peacefulness, so it is the best place to study or read something.

The word 'peaceful' is an adjective but here a noun 'peacefulness' is needed to match 'quietness'. Using the correct form improves sentence clarity.

× Nowadays I am preparing for my IELTS preparation, so I do my reading practice and listening practice in the library because library has The library offers a atmosphere of quiet and peaceful.

✓ Nowadays I am preparing for my IELTS, so I do my reading and listening practice in the library because the library offers an atmosphere of quiet and peacefulness.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' and 'atmosphere'. Also, 'a atmosphere' is incorrect; it should be 'an atmosphere' because 'atmosphere' starts with a vowel sound. 'Peaceful' should be 'peacefulness' as a noun.

× Nowadays I am preparing for my IELTS preparation, so I do my reading practice and listening practice in the library because library has The library offers a atmosphere of quiet and peaceful.

✓ Nowadays I am preparing for my IELTS, so I do my reading and listening practice in the library because the library offers an atmosphere of quiet and peacefulness.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' and 'atmosphere'. Also, 'a' should be 'an' before 'atmosphere' due to vowel sound. Correct article usage is important for grammatical accuracy.

× Nowadays I am preparing for my IELTS preparation, so I do my reading practice and listening practice in the library because library has The library offers a atmosphere of quiet and peaceful.

✓ Nowadays I am preparing for my IELTS, so I do my reading and listening practice in the library because the library offers an atmosphere of quiet and peacefulness.

The adjective 'peaceful' should be changed to the noun 'peacefulness' to correctly describe the atmosphere.

× No, I just started to go library when I was a kid.

✓ No, I just started to go to the library when I was a kid.

The phrase 'go library' is missing the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the'. Also, 'started to go' is correct but needs 'to the library' for completeness.

× No, I just started to go library when I was a kid.

✓ No, I just started to go to the library when I was a kid.

The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'library' because it refers to a specific place.

× No, I just started to go library when I was a kid.

✓ No, I just started to go to the library when I was a kid.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Omitting 'to' is grammatically incorrect.

× I was not interested in going to the library because in my home I can easily manage my homeworks and my readings.

✓ I was not interested in going to the library because at my home I could easily manage my homework and my reading.

Use 'at my home' instead of 'in my home' for location. 'Homework' and 'reading' are uncountable nouns and should not be pluralized. Also, past tense 'could' fits better with 'was not interested'.

× I was not interested in going to the library because in my home I can easily manage my homeworks and my readings.

✓ I was not interested in going to the library because at my home I could easily manage my homework and my reading.

'Homework' and 'reading' are uncountable nouns and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks' and 'readings'.

× Because in when I was kid there was not a tough hard work, so I can manage at my home.

✓ Because when I was a kid there was not tough hard work, so I could manage at my home.

Remove 'in' before 'when'. Use 'a kid' instead of 'kid'. Use past tense 'could' to match past context.

× Because in when I was kid there was not a tough hard work, so I can manage at my home.

✓ Because when I was a kid there was not tough hard work, so I could manage at my home.

The phrase 'in when' is incorrect; 'when' alone is sufficient. Also, 'a kid' is correct, and 'could' matches past tense better than 'can'.

× Because in when I was kid there was not a tough hard work, so I can manage at my home.

✓ Because when I was a kid there was not tough hard work, so I could manage at my home.

'Work' is uncountable and should not have 'a' before it. Also, 'tough hard' is redundant; one adjective is enough.

× Actually I am from India so I don't have any knowledge about Chinese kids but yes.

✓ Actually, I am from India, so I don't have any knowledge about Chinese kids, but yes.

Add commas for clarity. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× Everywhere, every country, each kids are going today library because it provides some of the another good books to get the knowledge and it is the best place to read.

✓ Everywhere, in every country, children are going to the library today because it provides some other good books to gain knowledge and it is the best place to read.

'Each kids' is incorrect; 'each' is singular, so use 'children' or 'every kid'. 'Going today library' needs 'to the library'. 'Some of the another' is incorrect; use 'some other'. 'Get the knowledge' is better as 'gain knowledge'.