Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I will often go to library to and reading.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Reading and study.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, when I kids I will I will go to play again or. Or it.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I think a little kids go to library, but more and more kids will go to outside or play a game or study in rooms.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构,避免重复和多余的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library to read books and study.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏完整句子和细节。建议用完整句子回答,并添加一些具体细节。
Ví dụ: I usually read books and study quietly in the library because it is a peaceful environment.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱,表达不清楚。建议用简单明了的句子表达过去的习惯,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: No, when I was a kid, I usually played outside instead of going to the library.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 表达不流畅,语法错误较多,句子结构混乱。建议使用连贯的句子,明确表达观点,并使用适当的连接词。
Ví dụ: I think only a few Chinese kids often go to the library. Most of them prefer playing outside, playing games, or studying at home.
× Yes, I will often go to library to and reading.
✓ Yes, I often go to the library to read.
句中“will often go”时态和语气不符合习惯表达,应该用一般现在时“often go”。“to and reading”结构错误,应该用不定式“to read”。另外,“library”前缺少冠词“the”。
× Yes, I will often go to library to and reading.
✓ Yes, I often go to the library to read.
“library”前缺少定冠词“the”,因为这里指特定的图书馆。
× Reading and study.
✓ I usually read and study.
句子缺少主语和谓语,导致结构不完整。应补充主语“I”和谓语动词“read and study”。
× No, when I kids I will I will go to play again or. Or it.
✓ No, when I was a kid, I would go out to play.
“when I kids”缺少动词,应为“when I was a kid”。“will I will go to play again or. Or it.”结构混乱,时态应为过去时,且表达应简洁明确。
× No, when I kids I will I will go to play again or. Or it.
✓ No, when I was a kid, I would go out to play.
“kids”应为单数“kid”,因为指的是自己小时候。
× No, when I kids I will I will go to play again or. Or it.
✓ No, when I was a kid, I would go out to play.
句中缺少必要的冠词“a”,应为“a kid”。
× I think a little kids go to library, but more and more kids will go to outside or play a game or study in rooms.
✓ I think few kids go to the library, but more and more kids go outside to play games or study in their rooms.
“a little kids”数量词使用错误,应为“few kids”。“go to outside”搭配错误,应为“go outside”。“play a game”应为复数“play games”。“study in rooms”应加所有格“their rooms”。
× I think a little kids go to library, but more and more kids will go to outside or play a game or study in rooms.
✓ I think few kids go to the library, but more and more kids go outside to play games or study in their rooms.
“library”前缺少定冠词“the”,因为指特定的图书馆。
× I think a little kids go to library, but more and more kids will go to outside or play a game or study in rooms.
✓ I think few kids go to the library, but more and more kids go outside to play games or study in their rooms.
“will go to outside”时态和用法不当,描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时“go outside”。