Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to make your sentences clear and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add reasons using words like 'because' or 'and'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate on my studies. Moreover, I can borrow many books instead of buying them, which saves money.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but it is a bit repetitive and lacks clear linking words. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details connected by linking words like 'usually', 'because', and 'so'.

Ví dụ: Usually, I read various types of books in the library because I prefer borrowing books instead of buying them. I enjoy reading there since the library is very quiet, which helps me focus.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use simple and correct sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence and explain your reason with simple vocabulary. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on clarity.

Ví dụ: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I did not know what a library was or what it offered.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and a bit repetitive. Try to give a complete answer with clear reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, try to finish your sentences properly.

Ví dụ: I am not sure, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because China values education highly and many children enjoy reading books.

× Yes, I frequently visit library because it's a place it's a quiet place where I can focus on my study attentively and I can borrow many books and rather than buying them and it's a very.

✓ Yes, I frequently visit the library because it's a quiet place where I can focus on my studies attentively and borrow many books rather than buying them.

The sentence misses the definite article 'the' before 'library' which is necessary when referring to a specific place. Also, 'it's a place it's a quiet place' is redundant and should be simplified. 'Study' should be pluralized to 'studies' to refer to academic work in general. The sentence structure is improved by removing unnecessary conjunctions and repetitions.

× As well, usually I read many different types of books in library and I don't buy any books and I prefer to borrow books from library and read them and I love the way to read in library because it's a pin drop silence.

✓ As well, usually I read many different types of books in the library and I don't buy any books; I prefer to borrow books from the library and read them. I love reading in the library because it's pin-drop silent.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place. The phrase 'pin drop silence' is corrected to 'pin-drop silent' to use the correct adjective form. The sentence is also improved by breaking it into clearer parts and correcting awkward phrasing.

× I'm afraid I didn't go to the library because when I was a kid because that time I didn't ever of eat and I have no knowledge about it.

✓ I'm afraid I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because at that time I had never heard of it and I had no knowledge about it.

The phrase 'didn't ever of eat' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be 'had never heard of it' to express lack of knowledge in the past. Also, 'have no knowledge' should be in past tense 'had no knowledge' to match the past context.

× I has I hadn't no clue what is library and what it's offer to us.

✓ I had no clue what a library is and what it offers us.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and double negatives. 'I has' is incorrect; it should be 'I had'. 'I hadn't no clue' is a double negative and should be 'I had no clue'. 'What is library' should be 'what a library is' to form an indirect question. 'What it's offer' should be 'what it offers' to agree with the singular subject.

× I'm afraid I have not much knowledge about it, but in my perspective and my knowledge, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because China is a very more knowledgeable country and they are very fond of reading, and they are.

✓ I'm afraid I don't have much knowledge about it, but from my perspective, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because China is a very knowledgeable country and they are very fond of reading.

'I have not much knowledge' is better expressed as 'I don't have much knowledge'. 'Very more knowledgeable' is incorrect; 'very' and 'more' should not be used together; 'very knowledgeable' is correct. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and they are' which is incomplete and should be removed or completed.