Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some redundancy and minor grammatical errors such as repeated words ('and and'). To improve, try to avoid repeating words and use more precise vocabulary. Also, you can use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, instead of saying 'I find I feel more comfortable there and and it is convenient too,' you could say 'I find it comfortable and convenient to study there because of the peaceful atmosphere.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because I find it comfortable and convenient. Moreover, the peaceful atmosphere there helps me concentrate better on my studies.

Gợi ý: Your answer repeats ideas and words, such as 'comfortable' and 'study,' which makes it less effective. To improve, try to avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about what you do in the library. For example, mention the subjects you study or types of books you read.

Ví dụ: I usually go to the library to study subjects like science and literature. Additionally, I enjoy reading various books there because the comfortable seating and quiet environment help me focus better.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'It is a peaceful here' and 'This place feels so comfort.' To improve, focus on correct sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating words like 'on on.'

Ví dụ: Actually, I did not go to the library as a child because my parents had a good collection of books at home. Therefore, I preferred studying at home, where it was peaceful and I could concentrate better on my studies.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains grammatical mistakes such as 'children has go' and 'more more concentrate.' Also, the sentence structure is unclear. To improve, use correct verb forms and clearer sentences. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically and provide specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because it provides a good environment for their development. Moreover, the quiet atmosphere helps them concentrate better on their studies, which is why libraries are popular study places for children.

× I find I feel more comfortable there and and it is convenient too.

✓ I find I feel more comfortable there and it is convenient too.

The sentence contains a repeated conjunction 'and and' which is a typographical error. Removing the extra 'and' improves clarity and correctness.

× I like to visit there because they have a perfect surrounding atmosphere to study.

✓ I like to visit there because it has a perfect surrounding atmosphere to study.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'the library' which is singular. Using 'it' correctly refers to the singular noun 'library'.

× I usually go to the libraries for study and read books and I I feel comfortable there.

✓ I usually go to the library to study and read books and I feel comfortable there.

The plural 'libraries' is incorrect if referring to a single library. Also, 'for study' should be 'to study' to correctly express purpose.

× It has a comfortable seating area to sit and comfortably read the books.

✓ It has a comfortable seating area to sit and comfortably read books.

The definite article 'the' before 'books' is unnecessary unless referring to specific books. Removing 'the' generalizes the statement appropriately.

× Actually no, because my parents had a good collection at home so I don't need to go to the libraries for study.

✓ Actually no, because my parents had a good collection at home so I didn't need to go to the library to study.

The tense should be past ('didn't need') to match 'had'. Also, 'libraries' should be singular if referring to one library, and 'for study' should be 'to study'.

× It is a peaceful here and I feel more concentrated on on studies at my home.

✓ It is peaceful here and I feel more concentrated on my studies at home.

'A peaceful' is incorrect; 'peaceful' is an adjective and does not need an article. Also, 'on studies' should be 'on my studies' to specify possession.

× This place feels so comfort.

✓ This place feels so comfortable.

'Comfort' is a noun; the adjective 'comfortable' should be used to describe how the place feels.

× Yes, children has go to the libraries because it is their own development atmosphere.

✓ Yes, children have to go to the libraries because it is their own development atmosphere.

'Children' is plural and requires the plural verb 'have'. Also, 'has go' is incorrect; 'have to go' expresses obligation correctly.

× It is good place for studies and more more concentrate there.

✓ It is a good place for studies and more concentration there.

'Good place' needs the article 'a'. 'More more concentrate' is incorrect; 'more concentration' is the correct noun form.

× So I think it is a good place for study for children's.

✓ So I think it is a good place for study for children.

'Children's' is possessive and incorrect here; the plural noun 'children' should be used without an apostrophe.