Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Now I seldom go to the library because I prefer to study at my dormitory which where it is quieter and more comfortable. However, I will go to the library. I need some specific books or I just want to change an environment.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
At library I will find some particular books which are not available online and I will take my computer to the library to study sometimes.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a kid, my mother always took me to the library. I love reading story books there, especially fairy tales and adventure stories, which were very exciting and interesting.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think in China many parents take their children to library regularly because they think it is an ideal environment for children to study and read. Also, it is helpful for people to develop a love for reading.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“which where”应为“where”,且表达略显重复。建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,同时注意语法准确性。
Ví dụ: I rarely go to the library now because I prefer studying in my dormitory, where it is quieter and more comfortable. However, I do visit the library when I need specific books or want a change of environment.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答缺少连贯的连接词,且句子结构较为简单。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并丰富细节。
Ví dụ: In the library, I usually look for specific books that are not available online, and sometimes I bring my computer to study there.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但可以增加更多细节和连接词,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, my mother often took me to the library. I loved reading storybooks there, especially fairy tales and adventure stories, because they were very exciting and interesting.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整,但缺少连接词,且表达略显简单。建议使用连接词并丰富细节,使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, in China, many parents regularly take their children to the library because they believe it provides an ideal environment for studying and reading. Moreover, it helps children develop a love for reading.
× Now I seldom go to the library because I prefer to study at my dormitory which where it is quieter and more comfortable.
✓ Now I seldom go to the library because I prefer to study at my dormitory where it is quieter and more comfortable.
句中使用了多余的关系代词“which”,应删除以避免重复。关系代词“where”已经足够表达意思。
× At library I will find some particular books which are not available online and I will take my computer to the library to study sometimes.
✓ At the library I will find some particular books which are not available online and I will take my computer to the library to study sometimes.
“library”前缺少定冠词“the”,因为这里指的是特定的图书馆。英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。
× Yes, I think in China many parents take their children to library regularly because they think it is an ideal environment for children to study and read.
✓ Yes, I think in China many parents take their children to the library regularly because they think it is an ideal environment for children to study and read.
“library”前缺少定冠词“the”,因为这里指的是特定的图书馆。英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。