Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'looking near my house' 대신 'near my house'를 사용하고, 문장을 더 명확하고 간결하게 만들어야 합니다. 또한, 'I like books to read'는 어색하므로 'I like reading books'로 수정하는 것이 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the public library near my house because I enjoy reading books and studying English, especially for IELTS preparation.

Gợi ý: 'in the second floor'는 'on the second floor'로 수정해야 하며, 문장 연결이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 'That's enough to spread my books out' 대신 'There is enough space to spread out my books'와 같이 표현하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Ví dụ: I usually study English in the library, especially on the second floor because there are large desks where I can spread out my books comfortably.

Gợi ý: 시제 일관성이 부족합니다. 과거에 대한 질문이므로 'go' 대신 'went'를 사용해야 하며, 'make feel comfortable'는 'made me feel comfortable'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 'I really like there'는 'I really liked it there'로 고쳐야 합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went to the library with my family when I was a kid. I usually went there at least once a week. The atmosphere was exciting and made me feel comfortable, so I really liked it there.

Gợi ý: 문장이 매우 어색하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 'library of her widely range of picture books for child children' 부분은 명확하지 않으므로, 'the library has a wide range of picture books for children'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 문장 구조를 간결하게 만들어야 합니다.

Ví dụ: Well, I think so. When I visit my local library, I see many children reading books, and the library has a wide range of picture books for children.

× Yes I do because the Public Library looking near my house and I like books to read so I go there to borrow books or study English like IELTS.

✓ Yes I do because the Public Library is located near my house and I like books to read so I go there to borrow books or study English like IELTS.

The phrase 'Public Library looking near my house' is incorrect because 'looking' is a present participle used improperly here. The correct form is to use the verb 'is located' or 'is near' to describe the library's position. This fixes the verb form and sentence structure.

× I usually study English in the library, especially in the second floor because there are large desks.

✓ I usually study English in the library, especially on the second floor because there are large desks.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to floors of a building. The correct preposition is 'on' for floors, so it should be 'on the second floor'.

× That's enough to spread my books out, so I like there.

✓ That's enough to spread my books out, so I like it there.

The pronoun 'there' is incorrectly used as the object of 'like'. The correct pronoun is 'it' to refer to the place, followed by 'there' to indicate location.

× Yes, I often go there with my family.

✓ Yes, I often went there with my family.

The question is about past habits ('when you were a kid'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'went' instead of present tense 'go'.

× I usually go there once a week at least.

✓ I usually went there at least once a week.

Since the context is about past habits, the verb should be in past tense 'went' instead of present tense 'go'. Also, 'at least once a week' is a more natural word order.

× The atmosphere was exciting for me and make feel comfortable, so I really like there.

✓ The atmosphere was exciting for me and made me feel comfortable, so I really liked it there.

The verb 'make' should be in past tense 'made' to agree with 'was'. Also, 'make feel comfortable' is missing the object 'me'. 'Like there' should be 'liked it there' to be grammatically correct.

× When I visit my local library I can see many children reading books and library of her widely range of picture books for child children.

✓ When I visit my local library, I can see many children reading books and the library has a wide range of picture books for children.

The phrase 'library of her widely range' is incorrect. It should be 'the library has a wide range'. Also, 'child children' is redundant; 'children' alone is correct. Added comma after introductory clause for clarity.