Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I go to the library from time to time, especially at the weekends or in the holidays.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
For most of the time I read the mystery novels in the library, but there are several times that I finished my homework there.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, I did not have such opportunity. Since I grew up in a distant village, there haven't been any public libraries for students to read, but in recent years the government have established a brand new library for students to go free of charge.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, a large number of Chinese students will go to the library to read various extra after class books, and sometimes they will also finish their homework in the library.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁自然,但表达略显简单,建议增加具体频率和原因,使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often visit the library, especially on weekends and during holidays, because it provides a quiet environment for me to focus on my studies.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单,建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,并具体说明阅读和做作业的原因或感受。
Ví dụ: Usually, I spend most of my time reading mystery novels in the library; however, I also occasionally complete my homework there because the quiet atmosphere helps me concentrate.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整,但语法和表达稍显生硬,建议调整句子结构,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have the opportunity to go to a library as a child because I grew up in a remote village without public libraries. However, in recent years, the government has built a new library that students can use free of charge.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中“extra after class books”表达不够准确,建议使用更地道的词汇,并增加连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese students often visit the library to read additional books beyond their school curriculum, and sometimes they also complete their homework there.
× For most of the time I read the mystery novels in the library, but there are several times that I finished my homework there.
✓ For most of the time I read mystery novels in the library, but there were several times that I finished my homework there.
句中描述过去发生的动作,第二部分“there are several times that I finished my homework there”时态不一致,应使用过去时“there were”。
× For most of the time I read the mystery novels in the library, but there are several times that I finished my homework there.
✓ For most of the time I read mystery novels in the library, but there were several times that I finished my homework there.
“mystery novels”前不需要定冠词“the”,因为这里指的是一类书籍,而非特指某些小说。
× No, I did not have such opportunity.
✓ No, I did not have such an opportunity.
“opportunity”是可数名词,前面需要加不定冠词“an”。
× ...but in recent years the government have established a brand new library for students to go free of charge.
✓ ...but in recent years the government has established a brand new library for students to go free of charge.
“government”作为单数集体名词,谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”。
× ...the government have established a brand new library for students to go free of charge.
✓ ...the government has established a brand new library for students to use free of charge.
“go free of charge”表达不准确,应该用“use free of charge”表示“免费使用”。