Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but you should improve naturalness by adding articles ('the library') and avoid redundancy ("makes me feel more peaceful and makes me concentrate more" can be simplified). Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library during my free periods or on weekends because it is my safe place. I enjoy studying there since the quiet environment helps me feel peaceful and concentrate better on my work.

Gợi ý: There is a vocabulary mistake ('taste' instead of 'test') and missing articles ('the library'). Also, try to avoid repeating 'studying' and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: Usually, I study for my upcoming tests and complete my daily homework in the library because I don't get distracted there. Therefore, studying is my main purpose when I go to the library.

Gợi ý: Remember to use articles ('the library') and correct tense consistency ('spent' instead of 'spend' for past). Also, avoid repeating 'as I was a kid' twice. Use linking words to improve flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to the library and spending time there when I was a kid because my father was a librarian, so I often spent many hours there.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks coherence and has grammar mistakes (e.g., 'studies' should be 'studying', 'says' should be 'say', 'loves' should be 'love'). Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ví dụ: From what I have read on social media and articles, Chinese kids are very interested in exploring new things and studying. Therefore, I believe many of them often go to libraries.

× Yes, I often go to library when I have my free periods or also in my weekends because library is my safe place.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library when I have my free periods or also on my weekends because the library is my safe place.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'in my weekends' should be 'on my weekends' because we use 'on' with days and parts of days.

× Yes, I often go to library when I have my free periods or also in my weekends because library is my safe place.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library when I have my free periods or also on my weekends because the library is my safe place.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'weekends'; the correct preposition is 'on' because we use 'on' for days and parts of days like weekends.

× I enjoy studying there in the quiet environment, which makes me feel more peaceful and makes me concentrate more on my work.

✓ I enjoy studying there in a quiet environment, which makes me feel more peaceful and helps me concentrate more on my work.

The phrase 'the quiet environment' implies a specific environment already known, but here it is general, so 'a quiet environment' is more appropriate. Also, 'makes me concentrate' is better expressed as 'helps me concentrate' for naturalness.

× Usually I study for my upcoming taste and also do my daily homework because I don't feel distracted when I'm studying in library.

✓ Usually I study for my upcoming test and also do my daily homework because I don't feel distracted when I'm studying in the library.

'Taste' is a typo and should be 'test'. Also, 'in library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× Usually I study for my upcoming taste and also do my daily homework because I don't feel distracted when I'm studying in library.

✓ Usually I study for my upcoming test and also do my daily homework because I don't feel distracted when I'm studying in the library.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× Yes, I enjoyed going to library and spending time there as I was a kid because my father is a librarian and I usually spend my hours in library since I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed going to the library and spending time there when I was a kid because my father is a librarian and I usually spent my hours in the library since I was a kid.

'Library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'as I was a kid' is better expressed as 'when I was a kid' for clarity. Additionally, 'usually spend' with 'since I was a kid' is inconsistent; past tense 'spent' fits better.

× Yes, I enjoyed going to library and spending time there as I was a kid because my father is a librarian and I usually spend my hours in library since I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed going to the library and spending time there when I was a kid because my father is a librarian and I usually spent my hours in the library since I was a kid.

The phrase 'usually spend' conflicts with 'since I was a kid' which implies past action; past tense 'spent' is appropriate here.

× Yes, I enjoyed going to library and spending time there as I was a kid because my father is a librarian and I usually spend my hours in library since I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed going to the library and spending time there when I was a kid because my father is a librarian and I usually spent my hours in the library since I was a kid.

The preposition 'in' is correct with 'library' but the article 'the' is missing before 'library'.

× Through social media I find out that Chinese kids are more invested in exploring new things and mainly studies.

✓ Through social media, I find out that Chinese kids are more invested in exploring new things and mainly studying.

The verb 'studies' is incorrect here; it should be the gerund 'studying' to parallel 'exploring' and fit the sentence structure.

× I have read some articles which says Chinese kids loves going to libraries.

✓ I have read some articles which say Chinese kids love going to libraries.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'articles' (plural), so the verb should be 'say' not 'says'. Also, 'kids' is plural, so the verb should be 'love' not 'loves'.