Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
No, not really. Since I grew up I never go to library often.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I went to library for reading or searching for some resource I need when I was a student. Umm or sometimes I I have to search some.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, I went to library when I was a kid for some Informa search some information. I also use the library's computer to search for information online.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Not really Asian parents. Not often do that.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式,如使用现在完成时描述过去到现在的习惯。
Ví dụ: No, I don't go to the library very often since I grew up. I usually prefer reading books online.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题,使用完整句子,并用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: When I was a student, I usually went to the library to read books or search for resources that I needed for my studies.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和更清晰的句子结构。
Ví dụ: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid to search for information. I also used the library's computer to look up information online.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱,缺乏连贯性。建议直接回答问题,并用完整句子说明原因。
Ví dụ: Not many Chinese kids go to the library often because their parents usually encourage them to study at home or attend extra classes.
× Since I grew up I never go to library often.
✓ Since I grew up, I never go to the library often.
这里缺少冠词“the”,因为“library”是特指的地方名词,应该用定冠词“the”。
× I went to library for reading or searching for some resource I need when I was a student.
✓ I went to the library for reading or searching for some resources I needed when I was a student.
“library”前缺少定冠词“the”,且“resource”应为复数形式“resources”,因为通常指多个资源。动词时态应与时间状语一致,改为过去时“needed”。
× I went to library for reading or searching for some resource I need when I was a student.
✓ I went to the library to read or search for some resources I needed when I was a student.
“for reading or searching”表达不自然,改为不定式“to read or search”更符合习惯用法。
× Umm or sometimes I I have to search some.
✓ Umm, or sometimes I have to search for some.
句子不完整,缺少宾语,且“search”后应加介词“for”。
× Yes, I went to library when I was a kid for some Informa search some information.
✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid to search for some information.
“library”前缺少定冠词“the”,且“Informa”应为“information”,句子结构不完整,改为不定式“to search for some information”。
× I also use the library's computer to search for information online.
✓ I also used the library's computer to search for information online.
句子描述过去的动作,动词“use”应使用过去式“used”。
× Not really Asian parents. Not often do that.
✓ Not really. Asian parents do not often do that.
句子结构混乱,缺少主语和谓语,调整为完整句子,表达更清晰。