Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping. I prefer to. Beside it immediately.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list when I am working. It really works because it helps my work more clearly and I can.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I'm not very sure about that, maybe people who don't like make list just because they feel it is complex, but I believe make a list can help us.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on paper and I will hang the paper in a place where is dominant. I do. In this way I can check the paper anytime.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够完整且表达不清晰,句子结构混乱,缺少连贯性。建议练习完整表达观点,避免断句和语法错误。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整,句子未结束,缺少具体细节和连贯的逻辑。建议练习完整表达原因和效果,使用连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I am working because it helps me organize my tasks clearly and improves my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达有语法错误,句子结构不完整,缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法练习,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I'm not very sure, but maybe some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated. However, I believe making lists can help us stay organized.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和不连贯的句子,表达不够自然。建议练习连贯表达和避免重复。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on paper and hang it in a prominent place so that I can check it anytime easily.
× I prefer to. Beside it immediately.
✓ I prefer to buy it immediately.
句子结构不完整,'I prefer to.'后面缺少动词,导致句意不明。应补充完整动词短语,使句子完整。
× It really works because it helps my work more clearly and I can.
✓ It really works because it helps me work more clearly and efficiently.
原句中'helps my work more clearly'表达不自然,应使用'helps me work'来表示帮助我工作。'and I can.'句子不完整,缺少谓语,需补充完整。
× maybe people who don't like make list just because they feel it is complex, but I believe make a list can help us.
✓ maybe people who don't like making lists just because they feel it is complex, but I believe making a list can help us.
动词后应使用动名词形式'making',且'list'应为复数'lists',以符合语法规则。
× I prefer to make a list on paper and I will hang the paper in a place where is dominant.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper and I will hang the paper in a prominent place.
'where is dominant'表达不自然,应使用形容词'prominent'修饰名词'place',使表达更准确。
× I do. In this way I can check the paper anytime.
✓ I do this. In this way, I can check the paper anytime.
'I do.'句子不完整,缺少宾语,需补充完整。添加逗号使句子更流畅。