List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy and organize your ideas more smoothly. Also, use linking words to connect your sentences for better coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I often forget some items if I don't. For example, once I went shopping without a list and missed buying milk. Therefore, having a list helps me remember everything I need.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question well, but it contains some hesitations and filler words. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, clarify your points with specific examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my studies, which is my main work. For instance, I list tasks like writing my thesis, completing homework, and preparing for exams. This helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid labeling people negatively and try to explain reasons more politely and clearly. Use linking words to structure your answer logically.

Ví dụ: Some people may dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to work spontaneously. However, lists can help prevent procrastination and keep tasks organized.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases and hesitations. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid filler words. Use linking words to compare the two options effectively.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, and I can easily edit or delete items. In contrast, paper lists can be inconvenient since you need a pen, and they can get damaged if it rains.

× I tried not having a list when I'm going for shop, going for shopping many times and I always fail to buy at least one thing that I plan to do, plan to buy.

✓ I tried not having a list when I'm going shopping many times and I always fail to buy at least one thing that I plan to buy.

The phrase 'going for shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' because 'go' is followed by the verb in -ing form to indicate the activity. Also, 'plan to do, plan to buy' is redundant; 'plan to buy' suffices.

× So after that, I'm just convinced that I can't remember everything and should have a list to buy whatever I'm about to.

✓ So after that, I'm just convinced that I can't remember everything and should have a list to buy whatever I'm about to buy.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'about to' which requires a verb to complete the phrase. Adding 'buy' completes the meaning. Also, 'should have a list to buy' is acceptable but adding 'buy' after 'about to' is necessary.

× I called him. Lazy people because having a list is always beneficial if you want to do your job and do what you really want to do instead of procrastination and just leaving things to do themselves, which they never do and you always have to have a list.

✓ I call them lazy people because having a list is always beneficial if you want to do your job and do what you really want to do instead of procrastinating and just leaving things to do themselves, which they never do, and you always have to have a list.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I called him' instead of 'I call them' to refer to people in general. Also, 'procrastination' should be the verb form 'procrastinating' to fit the sentence structure. The sentence is also improved by adding commas for clarity.

× I prefer to do it on my phone because so I was next to me and I can, uh, edit or remove anything I've done so far.

✓ I prefer to do it on my phone because it is always next to me and I can, uh, edit or remove anything I've done so far.

The phrase 'because so I was next to me' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'because it is always next to me' to correctly express the idea that the phone is always nearby.

× But having a paper, you should always carry a pen and paper gets really, I don't know, it rains by the time if it's in your pocket.

✓ But with paper, you should always carry a pen, and paper gets really, I don't know, wet if it rains when it's in your pocket.

The phrase 'having a paper' is incorrect; 'with paper' is better. Also, 'paper gets really, I don't know, it rains by the time' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be 'paper gets really wet if it rains when it's in your pocket' to convey the intended meaning.