Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, never. I always buy products. Uh, depend on my mind at the time.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
No, but I think I have to make a list because I sometimes forget the task which I have to do. So making a list is significant to for work.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because it is efficient to. Do something and. They don't forget what they have to do.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I totally prefer my phone because I I check I can take my phone all the time and. I completely forget phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りがあります。例えば、「I always buy products. Uh, depend on my mind at the time.」は意味が不明瞭で、主語と動詞の一致もありません。より自然で効果的な答え方として、直接質問に答えた後、理由を簡潔に述べることが重要です。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I feel like at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 文法の誤りと冗長な表現があります。例えば、「significant to for work」は不自然です。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って論理的に話をつなげましょう。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list for work, but I think I should because I sometimes forget my tasks. Therefore, making a list would help me stay organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答が意味不明で文法的に誤っています。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べる必要があります。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、具体的な理由を示しましょう。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember tasks mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、文法的に正しい文章を作ることが必要です。接続詞を使って理由を説明しましょう。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can check my list anytime and never forget my tasks.
× Uh, depend on my mind at the time.
✓ It depends on my mind at the time.
The original sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement, making it incomplete. Adding 'It' as the subject and 'depends' as the verb corrects the sentence structure.
× So making a list is significant to for work.
✓ So making a list is significant for work.
The phrase 'to for' is incorrect; only one preposition should be used. 'For' is appropriate here to indicate purpose or relevance.
× Because it is efficient to. Do something and.
✓ Because it is efficient to do something.
The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× I totally prefer my phone because I I check I can take my phone all the time and.
✓ I totally prefer my phone because I can take it with me all the time and check it whenever I want.
The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words. Reorganizing the sentence and removing repetition improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× I completely forget phone.
✓ I would completely forget without my phone.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'would' and 'without my phone' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.