List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "reduce my time or finding"; instead, say "save time finding". Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a bit more specific detail about how the list helps you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me save time and ensures I don't forget any groceries. For example, I usually organise my list by store sections, which makes shopping quicker and more efficient.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors such as "High Road low" which seems incorrect. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words to explain why making lists helps your work and give specific examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because it helps me stay organised and meet deadlines. For instance, I list my daily tasks in order of priority, which ensures I complete important jobs on time and maintain efficiency.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid vague statements like "making this" and incomplete ideas. Try to give a clear topic sentence, explain reasons logically with linking words, and provide specific examples.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time or their jobs are unpredictable, so rigid plans don't suit them. For example, creative professionals might prefer to work spontaneously rather than follow a strict list.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and contains unclear phrases like "on my" and "use your to make a list". Make sure to complete your sentences and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to compare both methods and give specific reasons for your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and offers useful features like reminders and easy editing. Unlike paper lists, digital ones help me stay organised without the risk of losing them.

× When I shop, I must make a list because it's the best way to reduce my time or finding the groceries that I need.

✓ When I shop, I must make a list because it's the best way to reduce my time spent finding the groceries that I need.

The phrase 'reduce my time or finding' is incorrect because 'reduce' should be followed by a noun or gerund phrase. 'Finding' is a gerund, but the conjunction 'or' is inappropriate here. The correct phrase is 'reduce my time spent finding' to clearly express the intended meaning.

× I have to make a list for my work because my work requires efficiency and a High Road low as well.

✓ I have to make a list for my work because my work requires efficiency and a high workload as well.

The phrase 'High Road low' is incorrect and seems to be a mishearing or typo. The intended phrase is likely 'high workload', which fits the context of requiring efficiency. Correcting this improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Some people don't like making this.

✓ Some people don't like making lists.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used here to refer to 'making lists'. It should be replaced with the noun 'lists' to clearly indicate what people don't like making.

× It's just because they don't have time to do so or their work requires flexibility, which making a list is not something that is required for the work I believe everything should be.

✓ It's just because they don't have time to do so or their work requires flexibility, which means making a list is not required for the work, I believe everything should be flexible.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks clarity. Adding 'which means' clarifies the relationship between flexibility and list-making. Also, the phrase 'I believe everything should be' is incomplete and is corrected to 'I believe everything should be flexible' to complete the thought.

× It's more convenient to make a list on my, and it's obvious that if you use your to make a list, there are more functions for you to use instead of just use paper, because you have to design your own schedule or list with your own imagination, and it's hard to do so.

✓ It's more convenient to make a list on my phone, and it's obvious that if you use your phone to make a list, there are more functions for you to use instead of just using paper, because you have to design your own schedule or list with your own imagination, and it's hard to do so.

The original sentence is missing the word 'phone' after 'my' and 'your', making it incomplete. Also, 'just use paper' should be 'just using paper' to maintain parallel gerund forms. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.