List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但有语法错误和用词不准确（如“buy”应为“buying”，“lease”应为“list”），且有口语填充词“umm”，影响流畅度。建议注意动词形式和拼写，避免重复表达，保持句子简洁自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to avoid buying unnecessary items. This helps me stay organized and ensures I get everything I need.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，语法和句子结构混乱，表达不连贯。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually avoid making lists for work because tasks often change, and rewriting the list is troublesome. So, I prefer to remember my tasks instead.

Gợi ý: 回答内容基本相关，但表达不够准确，存在语法错误和重复。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because it can be troublesome to write everything down and rewrite if plans change. Also, many prefer using their phones for convenience.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing helps me track my progress more clearly than using my phone.

× Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because I try to avoid buy some unnecessary groceries.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because I try to avoid buying some unnecessary groceries.

After the verb 'avoid', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'buy' should be corrected to 'buying'. This is a common rule in English where certain verbs are followed by gerunds.

× So normally I will umm make a lease and that will help me to stay organized and ensure that I bought everything that I need.

✓ So normally I will umm make a list and that will help me to stay organized and ensure that I buy everything that I need.

The word 'lease' is incorrect here; it should be 'list' to match the context. Also, 'bought' is past tense which does not fit the present/future context; it should be 'buy'.

× When I try to avoid make, at least for my work, because if some tasks change that I have to rewrite everything about in the list, so it's kind of troublesome for me to follow up the later task.

✓ When I try to avoid making, at least for my work, because if some tasks change I have to rewrite everything in the list, so it's kind of troublesome for me to follow up the later task.

After 'avoid', the verb should be in '-ing' form, so 'make' should be 'making'. Also, 'rewrite everything about in the list' is awkward; 'rewrite everything in the list' is correct.

× When I try to avoid make, at least for my work, because if some tasks change that I have to rewrite everything about in the list, so it's kind of troublesome for me to follow up the later task.

✓ I try to avoid making lists for my work because if some tasks change, I have to rewrite everything in the list, which is kind of troublesome for me to follow up on later tasks.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reordering and restructuring improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I try. Therefore I try to remember everything.

✓ So I try; therefore, I try to remember everything.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper conjunction use. Using a semicolon and comma after 'therefore' connects the ideas properly.

× Well, I think one reason would be people true find it kind of troublesome for them to write down everything and then if things change that they have to rewrite it again.

✓ Well, I think one reason would be that people truly find it kind of troublesome to write down everything, and then if things change, they have to rewrite it again.

'True' should be 'truly' as an adverb modifying 'find'. Also, 'that' is needed after 'reason would be' to introduce the clause. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× And the other reason would be nowadays people get used to use their phone to do everything.

✓ And the other reason would be that nowadays people are used to using their phones to do everything.

The phrase 'get used to use' is incorrect; it should be 'are used to using'. Also, 'phone' should be plural 'phones' to generalize.

× In my case, I prefer to make a list on my paper because if I'm doing some tasks, I prefer to write down on a paper and track my progress.

✓ In my case, I prefer to make a list on paper because if I'm doing some tasks, I prefer to write them down on paper and track my progress.

'My paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct phrase. Also, 'write down' should have an object, so 'them' is added.

× I think that will be more straightforward to me than compared to. Phones.

✓ I think that will be more straightforward to me compared to phones.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. Removing 'than' and the period after 'compared to' corrects the sentence structure.