List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，如“what catches my eyes”应为“what catches my eye”，“it make me feel”应为“it makes me feel”。建议注意主谓一致和单复数形式，同时减少口头语“uh”、“umm”，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse the shelves and see what I need. This way, I can pick up whatever catches my eye immediately, which makes me feel less stressed.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有多处口头语，导致信息传达不明确。建议简洁明了地说明做清单的原因和效果，避免重复和不必要的停顿。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I have many small tasks to complete. Making a list helps me organize my work efficiently, and it works very well.

Gợi ý: 回答中“casualty”用词错误，应为“casualness”或“spontaneity”。表达不够具体，建议用更准确的词汇并补充具体原因，使内容更丰富。

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they enjoy spontaneity and prefer to welcome surprises in life, just like me.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“I'd like go for”应为“I'd like to go for”，“as as I like”重复。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I think making a list on paper or on my phone is both fine, but if I have to choose, I prefer my phone because it's more flexible and allows me to adjust my schedule easily.

× Now, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse the shelf and see what I need.

✓ Now, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse the shelves and see what I need.

这里的'shelf'应使用复数形式'shelves'，因为购物时通常会浏览多个货架。单复数不一致属于单复数问题。

× Uh, what catches my eyes.

✓ Uh, what catches my eye.

习惯用语是'catch my eye'，表示吸引我的注意力，'eye'应为单数。

× This way I can pick up whatever I needed right away, umm, and it make me feel less stressful.

✓ This way I can pick up whatever I need right away, umm, and it makes me feel less stressed.

'needed'应为现在时'need'，因为描述的是现在的情况；'make'应为第三人称单数形式'makes'，主语是'it'；'stressful'形容词用错，应为'less stressed'表示感觉压力小。

× and it make me feel less stressful.

✓ and it makes me feel less stressed.

主语'it'是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'，即'makes'。

× I can pick up whatever I needed right away

✓ I can pick up whatever I need right away

这里描述的是现在的能力或习惯，应该用现在时'need'，而不是过去时'needed'。

× I usually make a list to, uh, get rid of, uh, lifting one or two, and it works very, very well.

✓ I usually make a list to, uh, get rid of, uh, lifting one or two, and it works very, very well.

此句中'lifting one or two'表达不清，可能是口误或表达错误，但不属于给定的语法问题类型，故不修改。

× and it make me feel less stressful.

✓ and it makes me feel less stressed.

'stressful'是形容事物的形容词，表示令人有压力；这里应表达人的感受，故用过去分词形容词'stressed'。

× I think people don't like making this simply because they enjoy the casualty and they welcome the surprises in life, just like me.

✓ I think people don't like making this simply because they enjoy the casualness and they welcome the surprises in life, just like me.

'casualty'意为'伤亡'，用词错误，应为'casualness'表示随意、随性的状态。

× Take me as an example.

✓ Take me as an example.

此句无语法错误，符合口语表达习惯。

× I think make a list on paper or on my phone is both OK, but if I have to choose I'd like go for.

✓ I think making a list on paper or on my phone is both OK, but if I have to choose I'd like to go for.

'make'应改为动名词'making'作主语；'I'd like go for'缺少不定式to，应为'I'd like to go for'。

× I like to go for my phone because I think it's more flexible.

✓ I like to go for my phone because I think it's more flexible.

此句无语法错误，表达清晰。

× I can accommodate the schedule as as I like.

✓ I can accommodate the schedule as I like.

重复了'as'，应删除一个。