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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I think it makes me convenient and more clear when I was shopping.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was working I always make a list and I always list my work to do to make me more clear in my working.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think some people don't want to make a list because they are lazy or don't want to do it because they can know what they were. They will do not need a list.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prepare to make a list in my form because I think it is more convenient and I can see it all the time.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但语法和用词不够准确,句子结构较为简单。建议注意时态一致性,避免重复表达,并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中时态混乱,表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态,简洁明了地表达观点,并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and stay focused throughout the day.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议用更准确的词汇和句式表达原因,避免重复和模糊的表述。

Ví dụ: I believe some people avoid making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on their memory instead.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中用词不当,表达不够自然。建议使用正确的词汇(如phone而非form),并简洁明了地说明理由。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can access them anytime.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I think it makes me convenient and more clear when I was shopping.

Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I think it makes me feel convenient and clearer when I am shopping.

这里的时态应该保持一致,描述现在的习惯动作,不能用过去时"was shopping",应使用现在进行时"am shopping"。另外,"makes me convenient"表达不准确,应该用"makes me feel convenient"或更自然的表达。

Past tense issue

× Yes, when I was working I always make a list and I always list my work to do to make me more clear in my working.

Yes, when I was working I always made a list and I always listed my work to do to make myself clearer in my work.

句中描述过去的习惯动作,动词应使用过去时态,如"made"和"listed"。另外,"make me more clear"应改为"make myself clearer",更符合英语表达习惯。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think some people don't want to make a list because they are lazy or don't want to do it because they can know what they were. They will do not need a list.

I think some people don't want to make a list because they are lazy or don't want to do it because they know what they want. They do not need a list.

"they can know what they were"表达不正确,应为"they know what they want"。此外,"They will do not need a list"语序错误,应为"They do not need a list"。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prepare to make a list in my form because I think it is more convenient and I can see it all the time.

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it is more convenient and I can see it all the time.

"prepare to make a list in my form"中的"in my form"应为"on my phone",这里是介词使用错误,且"prepare"用词不当,应为"prefer"表示偏好。

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