Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list one shop because if you write that you should to buy what that is clear to know you want to buy.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
No, I don't make a list forever because I think it's so so no useful and I have phone I didn't make a list.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because making list that we should use paper and if you write it lost time and some people have phone they didn't use the paper.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone every day in my hand and when I drop working study I should use the phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议学习正确的句子结构,避免重复和冗余,回答时直接表达观点并补充具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏逻辑和连贯性,语法错误影响理解。建议使用连接词使回答更连贯,并明确表达观点和理由。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make lists for work because I find them not very useful. Instead, I rely on my phone to keep track of my tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱,语法错误多,缺少连贯的逻辑。建议学习如何用连接词组织句子,并提供具体原因。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because writing them on paper can be time-consuming, and nowadays many prefer using their phones instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够流畅,语法和表达有误。建议练习使用正确的句子结构,表达清晰的理由,并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's convenient to check and update my list anytime during work or study.
× Yes, I make a list one shop because if you write that you should to buy what that is clear to know you want to buy.
✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because if you write what you should buy, it is clear to know what you want to buy.
原句中 'one shop' 应为 'when I shop',表示时间状语,且 'should to buy' 中 'to' 不应出现,动词后直接接动词原形。建议使用 'when I shop' 表示购物时,'should buy' 表示应该买。
× Yes, I make a list one shop because if you write that you should to buy what that is clear to know you want to buy.
✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because if you write what you should buy, it is clear to know what you want to buy.
'should to buy' 中 'to' 是多余的,情态动词后应直接接动词原形。
× No, I don't make a list forever because I think it's so so no useful and I have phone I didn't make a list.
✓ No, I don't make a list often because I think it's not very useful and I have a phone so I don't make a list.
'forever' 用法错误,应为 'often' 表示频率;'so so no useful' 语法错误,应为 'not very useful';'I have phone' 缺少冠词,应为 'I have a phone';'I didn't make a list' 时态和语境不符,应为 'I don't make a list'。
× Because making list that we should use paper and if you write it lost time and some people have phone they didn't use the paper.
✓ Because making a list means we should use paper, and if you write it, it wastes time. Some people have phones and they don't use paper.
'making list that' 应为 'making a list means that';'lost time' 应为 'wastes time';'some people have phone' 缺冠词,应为 'some people have phones';'they didn't use the paper' 时态和语法错误,应为 'they don't use paper'。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone every day in my hand and when I drop working study I should use the phone.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I have my phone in my hand every day, and when I stop working or studying, I use my phone.
'the phone every day in my hand' 结构不正确,应为 'I have my phone in my hand every day';'when I drop working study' 语法错误,应为 'when I stop working or studying';'I should use the phone' 语境中不需要 'should',直接用 'I use my phone' 更合适。