Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Of course I will make a list because if I will forget some, I make a list not forget anything that I could could buy. So every time I go to shopping or something else I make a list.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list whenever I have tasks to complete, whether studying or doing course around the house such as cleaning or tidying the table. Making a list helps me organize my work step by step which makes it easy to stay focused and finish every time on time. I find this method really effective because it will distress and keeps me motivated.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well in my opinion I think it depends on situation. Maybe while doing something step by step from watching movies, from watching plan something would come wrong. Like a situation will be not like you have prepared. So I think they hate it because.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer make a list on my phone because it's really helpful. It really it easy to watch like my phone is always with me. I will just I will just look out to the note app and see them my friend.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors which affect clarity. Try to make your response more concise and grammatically correct by directly stating your habit and reason. Avoid repeating phrases and ensure your sentences are complete and clear.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything important. It helps me stay organised and saves time when I am at the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and correct errors such as 'distress' which should be 'de-stress'. Also, be careful with verb forms and pluralisation.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I have tasks to complete, whether it's studying or doing chores like cleaning. This helps me organise my work step by step, so I can stay focused and finish on time. I find this method very effective because it helps me de-stress and keeps me motivated.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, making it difficult to understand your point. Try to give a clear opinion with specific reasons, and use linking words to structure your answer logically. Avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your ideas are fully expressed.
Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their flexibility. For example, if plans change unexpectedly, a list might become useless, so they prefer to be spontaneous instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your preference clearly and explain why, using correct sentence structures and linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. Since I always have my phone with me, I can easily check my notes anytime, which helps me stay organised.
× Of course I will make a list because if I will forget some, I make a list not forget anything that I could could buy.
✓ Of course I will make a list because if I forget some, I make a list to not forget anything that I could buy.
In conditional sentences referring to the future, the 'if' clause should use the present tense, not 'will'. Using 'if I will forget' is incorrect; it should be 'if I forget'. Also, 'could could' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'could'.
× So every time I go to shopping or something else I make a list.
✓ So every time I go shopping or do something else, I make a list.
The verb 'go' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'to' when expressing activities, so 'go shopping' is correct, not 'go to shopping'. Also, adding 'do' before 'something else' clarifies the action.
× Making a list helps me organize my work step by step which makes it easy to stay focused and finish every time on time.
✓ Making a list helps me organize my work step by step, which makes it easy to stay focused and finish everything on time.
The phrase 'finish every time on time' is awkward and unclear. It should be 'finish everything on time' to clearly express completing all tasks punctually.
× I find this method really effective because it will distress and keeps me motivated.
✓ I find this method really effective because it reduces stress and keeps me motivated.
The phrase 'it will distress' is incorrect; 'distress' is a noun or verb meaning to cause stress. The intended meaning is likely 'reduces stress'. Also, 'keeps' agrees with singular subject 'it'.
× Well in my opinion I think it depends on situation.
✓ Well, in my opinion, I think it depends on the situation.
The sentence is missing commas after introductory phrases and the article 'the' before 'situation' is necessary to specify the context.
× Maybe while doing something step by step from watching movies, from watching plan something would come wrong.
✓ Maybe while doing something step by step, like watching movies or planning, something could go wrong.
The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'From watching plan' is incorrect; it should be 'like watching movies or planning'. Also, 'would come wrong' should be 'could go wrong' to express possibility.
× Like a situation will be not like you have prepared.
✓ The situation might not be as you have prepared.
The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses proper word order and phrasing to express the intended meaning.
× So I think they hate it because.
✓ So I think they hate it because of that.
The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'of that' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.
× I prefer make a list on my phone because it's really helpful.
✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it's really helpful.
The verb 'prefer' is followed by the gerund form of the verb, so 'making' is correct instead of 'make'.
× It really it easy to watch like my phone is always with me.
✓ It's really easy to use because my phone is always with me.
The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'It really it easy to watch' is incorrect; 'It's really easy to use' conveys the intended meaning clearly.
× I will just I will just look out to the note app and see them my friend.
✓ I will just look at the notes app and see them, my friend.
The sentence has repetition ('I will just I will just') and incorrect preposition ('look out to'). The correct phrase is 'look at the notes app'. Also, adding a comma before 'my friend' clarifies the address.