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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

No, I don't. I often just think of what I want to buy and I will buy it. I will not. I will not have a plane.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

No, I usually don't make a list for my work because I just keep it in my mind and but sometimes I will keep very important things in my phone list.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think it's because they just want to do something spontaneously and they are not a person who like to control themselves by a list and it just like me.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

If I must do a list in advance, I prefer to do it on my phone because I think it's more convenient than in a paper. I don't have to take a piece of paper, which is very easy to lose.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,有重复和无关内容,建议回答时保持简洁,避免重复,并确保内容相关。

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整,但句子结构不够流畅,建议使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list for my work because I keep tasks in my mind. However, for very important things, I sometimes save them in a list on my phone.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 表达有些重复且语法不够准确,建议简化句子结构并使用连接词提高流畅度。

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to act spontaneously and don't like to be controlled by a list, just like me.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答较好,但部分表达不够地道,建议注意冠词使用和句子简洁性。

Ví dụ: If I have to make a list in advance, I prefer to use my phone because it's more convenient than paper. I don't need to carry a piece of paper, which can be easily lost.

Ngữ pháp

Modal verb usage

× I will not. I will not have a plane.

I will not.

这里的句子“I will not have a plane”没有上下文支持,且语义不清,可能是多余或错误的表达。建议删除这部分,保持句子简洁。

Incorrect conjunction use

× I just keep it in my mind and but sometimes I will keep very important things in my phone list.

I just keep it in my mind, but sometimes I will keep very important things in my phone list.

“and but”是错误的连词搭配,应使用“but”表示转折。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× they are not a person who like to control themselves by a list and it just like me.

they are not people who like to control themselves by a list and it's just like me.

“they”指代复数,应使用复数名词“people”,动词“like”需与复数主语一致,且“it just like me”应为“it's just like me”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to do it on my phone because I think it's more convenient than in a paper.

I prefer to do it on my phone because I think it's more convenient than on paper.

“paper”前不需要冠词,且比较时应使用“on paper”而非“in a paper”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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