Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
I sometimes make a list when I have to go shop, go to go shop, buy something from asking from my mother because I sometimes lost.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I when I was working at the company I always made the list because it's very useful thing to focus on what I have to do next.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think some people avoid want to avoid. Something is not working or not complete. Sometimes it's. She.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Nowadays I prefer to make a list by my phone because it's a large meal. If I forget it, but the paper 1 is very umm, easy to make.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で冗長な表現が多いです。質問に直接答え、簡潔で明確な文章を心がけましょう。例えば、"I sometimes make a shopping list to avoid forgetting items."のようにシンプルに答え、必要に応じて理由を付け加えると良いです。
Ví dụ: I sometimes make a shopping list to avoid forgetting items. This helps me stay organized and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや繰り返しがあります。より自然な表現で、理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。例えば、"Yes, when I worked at the company, I always made lists because they helped me focus on my tasks."のように。
Ví dụ: Yes, when I worked at the company, I always made lists because they helped me focus on my tasks and manage my time effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して明確な理由を述べ、具体的な例を加えると良いです。例えば、"Some people dislike making lists because they feel stressed if tasks are not completed."のように。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel stressed when tasks remain unfinished, which makes them avoid planning.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で文法的にも誤りがあります。好みをはっきり述べ、その理由を具体的に説明しましょう。例えば、"I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit them."のように。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit or add items anytime.
× I sometimes make a list when I have to go shop, go to go shop, buy something from asking from my mother because I sometimes lost.
✓ I sometimes make a list when I have to go shopping or buy something after asking my mother because I sometimes get lost.
The verb 'shop' should be in the '-ing' form 'shopping' after 'go to'. Also, 'from asking from my mother' is incorrect; it should be 'after asking my mother'. The phrase 'I sometimes lost' lacks an auxiliary verb and should be 'I sometimes get lost' to be grammatically correct.
× Yes, when I when I was working at the company I always made the list because it's very useful thing to focus on what I have to do next.
✓ Yes, when I was working at the company, I always made a list because it was a very useful thing to help me focus on what I had to do next.
The phrase 'made the list' should be 'made a list' as it is a general statement. 'It's very useful thing' should be 'it was a very useful thing' to match past tense. Also, 'to focus on what I have to do next' should be 'to help me focus on what I had to do next' to maintain past tense consistency.
× I think some people avoid want to avoid. Something is not working or not complete. Sometimes it's. She.
✓ I think some people want to avoid making lists because they feel something is not working or not complete sometimes.
The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Nowadays I prefer to make a list by my phone because it's a large meal. If I forget it, but the paper 1 is very umm, easy to make.
✓ Nowadays, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient if I forget it, but paper is also very easy to use.
The preposition 'by' is incorrect; 'on my phone' is correct. 'It's a large meal' is likely a mishearing or error; 'more convenient' fits better. 'The paper 1' is incorrect; it should be 'paper'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.