List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih alami dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list on my phone because I often forget important items. This helps me remember everything I need to buy.

Gợi ý: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas untuk menjelaskan alasan tidak membuat daftar kerja. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran.

Ví dụ: No, I don't make a list for my work because I handle tasks as they come. I prefer to do each task immediately instead of planning ahead.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kejelasan ide. Jelaskan alasan dengan kalimat yang lebih teratur dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember tasks without writing them down.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan terstruktur. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dengan lancar.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, making it easy to access. Also, it's more environmentally friendly than using paper.

× Yes, I do sometime make a list when I go to the shop because I often forget what is important to to buy.

✓ Yes, I sometimes make a list when I go to the shop because I often forget what is important to buy.

The word 'sometime' is incorrectly used; the correct adverb is 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, there is a repeated word 'to' which should be removed. 'Sometimes' is the correct form to express occasional action.

× That's why I make a list in my notebook on the phone to make.

✓ That's why I make a list in my notebook or on my phone.

The phrase 'in my notebook on the phone to make' is confusing and incorrectly ordered. The correct expression should be 'in my notebook or on my phone' to clearly indicate the places where the list is made.

× No, I don't make a list for my work because my work is like, what coming? I'll do it. What next? I'll do it.

✓ No, I don't make a list for my work because my work is like, whatever comes, I'll do it. Whatever is next, I'll do it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Using 'whatever comes' and 'whatever is next' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× So there's no, uh, what to do next, but what is coming, I will do it right now so I don't make a list for my work.

✓ So there's nothing to do next; whatever is coming, I will do it right away, so I don't make a list for my work.

The phrase 'what to do next' is awkward; 'nothing to do next' is clearer. Also, 'what is coming' should be 'whatever is coming' to correctly refer to tasks. 'Right now' is better expressed as 'right away' for immediacy.

× I think making a list not for old people because uh, some people have a good memory in their head so they can memorize everything.

✓ I think making a list is not for old people because some people have a good memory and can memorize everything.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'making a list'. Also, 'in their head' is unnecessary; 'have a good memory' suffices. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× They can make a list in their, their, their head so they don't need to make a list.

✓ They can make a list in their head, so they don't need to write one down.

Repetition of 'their' is an error. Also, 'make a list in their head' is better expressed as 'keep a list in their head' or 'remember the list mentally'. Added 'write one down' for clarity.

× And for people who is easy for you.

✓ And for people who find it easy.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'People who is easy for you' is incorrect; it should be 'people who find it easy' to express the idea properly.

× I prefer to make this on my phone because phone is always with me, I will always bring it to everywhere and it's easy to open it, then open the paper and also it is more, uh, environmental friendly.

✓ I prefer to make this on my phone because my phone is always with me; I always bring it everywhere, and it's easier to open than paper. Also, it is more environmentally friendly.

Missing possessive 'my' before 'phone'. 'Bring it to everywhere' is incorrect; correct is 'bring it everywhere'. 'Easy to open it, then open the paper' is awkward; better to say 'easier to open than paper'. 'Environmental friendly' should be 'environmentally friendly' as an adverb modifying the adjective.