Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, actually I do, because I don't have a good memory. Every time when I go to the supermarket I will forget what I meant to buy. So a shopping list is my good assistance and I will umm, you know, just list everything quite clearly to help me.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I do just like going to the supermarket. I have to clarify on what my task within several hours or within the whole day. So it really has impact on my uh, you know, improving my work productively.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I know there are so many people. They are quite, you know, chill and make everything easier. They don't take anything serious, but they still can't finish their work perfectly. I am a little bit envious of this kind of ability, but most of them, you know, they will mess everything up.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Yay. To be honest, if the conditions allowed, I would like to writing down my plan on paper. But you know, oh, nowadays it's hard for me to find a paper immediately, especially when I work outside study outside. So typing down on the phone is a good alternative.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但有些口语填充词(如“umm”,“you know”)影响了流畅度。建议减少这些词汇,使用更自然简洁的表达,同时增加连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items. Therefore, I write down everything clearly to ensure I don't miss anything when I go to the supermarket.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和不自然的表达,如“clarify on what my task”。建议使用更准确的句型,并避免口语填充词,提升表达的准确性和流畅度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work just like when I shop. It helps me organize my tasks for the day and improves my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答内容有些混乱,缺乏逻辑连贯性。建议明确表达观点,使用连接词组织句子,避免重复和口语填充词,使回答更清晰有条理。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer a relaxed approach and find lists too serious. However, this often leads to unfinished tasks and disorganization.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和不自然表达,如“like to writing down”。建议使用正确的语法结构,减少口语填充词,并使句子更简洁流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer writing my plans on paper when possible because it feels more personal. However, since paper is not always available, I often use my phone to type my lists as a convenient alternative.
× I would like to writing down my plan on paper.
✓ I would like to write down my plan on paper.
在“would like to”结构中,动词应使用原形,不能用动名词形式。这里应使用“write”而不是“writing”。