List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and keeps my budget under control. This way, I can focus on purchasing only the important things I need.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and unclear phrases. Try to organize your ideas better and avoid repeating words like 'making' multiple times. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' to connect your points clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make lists for my work because it is hectic with many tasks. Without lists, I might forget important tasks, so making notes helps me stay organized and remember everything.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid unfinished thoughts. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' properly to show contrast and reasons.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and consider it extra work. However, making lists helps people stay organized and manage their tasks better.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contradictory. Try to clearly state your preference and explain your reasons logically. Avoid contradictory statements and use linking words like 'because' and 'besides' correctly.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because it is more convenient and efficient. I don't need to carry extra items like paper and pen, and I can easily edit my lists on the phone.

× Yes, I often make a list when I go for shopping in supermarkets because making Li making list of items which I need, it avoids me from extra purchasing and also be my budget friendly option.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping in supermarkets because making a list of items I need helps me avoid extra purchases and is also budget-friendly.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 8). Also, 'making Li making list' seems to be a typo and should be 'making a list'. The sentence structure was awkward and needed correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× So I can list out what are the important thing and what needs.

✓ So I can list out what the important things are and what I need.

The phrase 'important thing' should be plural 'important things' to match the context (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1). Also, 'what needs' is incomplete and should be 'what I need' for clarity.

× Yes, I usually make list for my work because my work is kind of a hectic job where there are lots of many things to do and without making, making or making notes or listing out those items, I really get confused and forget some important tax.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because my job is hectic with many things to do, and without making notes or listing those items, I get confused and forget some important tasks.

The phrase 'make list' should be 'make a list' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1). 'Lots of many things' is redundant; 'many things' suffices. 'Important tax' is incorrect; it should be 'important tasks'.

× So to prevent me from, you know, forgetting.

✓ So to prevent myself from, you know, forgetting.

The phrase 'to prevent me from' is incorrect; it should be 'to prevent myself from' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 8). The reflexive pronoun is required after 'prevent'.

× Some people may not like making a list because it's a it's a job too. It is also the ad add up in a tax. So mostly people become lazy to do things so they avoid this.

✓ Some people may not like making a list because it's a job too and it adds to their tasks. So, most people become lazy to do it and avoid making lists.

The phrase 'it is also the ad add up in a tax' is unclear and seems to be a mishearing or typo. Corrected to 'it adds to their tasks' for clarity. Also, conjunctions were misused and sentence structure was awkward (Grammar Problem Type ID: 16).

× I usually prefer making notes on phone rather than paper because it is more hectic and it's overwhelming that we need to take a paper and then a pen.

✓ I usually prefer making notes on my phone rather than on paper because it is more convenient and less overwhelming than having to take paper and a pen.

The phrase 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11). Also, 'more hectic' is not appropriate here; 'more convenient' fits better. 'Take a paper' should be 'take paper' or 'take a piece of paper'.

× Besides it is more efficient but considering phone it is quite hectic compared to phone.

✓ Besides, it is more efficient, but using a phone can sometimes be quite hectic compared to paper.

The sentence is confusing and contradictory. 'Considering phone it is quite hectic compared to phone' is unclear. Corrected for clarity and proper conjunction use (Grammar Problem Type ID: 16).