List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use simpler, correct sentences and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and how it helps you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. Therefore, I write down all the items I need and check them one by one while shopping to ensure I don't miss anything.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains several grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly. Avoid repeating words and check your pronunciation of phrases like 'notepad'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list of tasks for my work because I often have many things to do at the same time. Writing them down on my notepad helps me focus and manage my time better. As a result, I have been more successful in my professional life.

Gợi ý: Your answer is thoughtful but has some grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to use simpler sentences and avoid repeating words. Also, clarify phrases like 'write their future goals in an outfit' which is confusing. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time. Nowadays, many want quick results and lack the patience to sit down and write their plans carefully. So, this impatience might be the main reason they avoid making lists.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences. Also, explain clearly how writing on paper benefits you.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because I don't use my phone much. Writing on paper is easy to carry and helps improve my literacy skills. Moreover, it allows me to think more clearly about how I will use the information.

× Certainly I like to make a list when I go to shopping because I have a habit of forgetting everything.

✓ Certainly I like to make a list when I go shopping because I have a habit of forgetting everything.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; after 'go', the verb should be in the '-ing' form without 'to'. So, it should be 'go shopping'. This is a common error in English verb patterns.

× So I try to write write down them and go them 1 by 1.

✓ So I try to write them down and go through them one by one.

The pronoun 'them' should come immediately after 'write' as the object, so 'write them down' is correct. Also, 'go them 1 by 1' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go through them one by one'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, certainly I make a list of what to do in my work because I have a lots of thing at once.

✓ Yes, certainly I make a list of what to do in my work because I have lots of things at once.

'Lots' is plural and should be followed by a plural noun without 'a'. So, 'a lots of thing' is incorrect; it should be 'lots of things'. This is a common pluralization error.

× So I try to make the make a list down down by writing them on my not paid so and it's really worked very well for me.

✓ So I try to make a list by writing them on my notepad and it has really worked very well for me.

The phrase 'make the make a list down down' is redundant and incorrect. The correct expression is 'make a list'. Also, 'not paid so' seems to be a typo for 'notepad'. The verb tense 'it's really worked' should be 'it has really worked' for present perfect tense indicating experience.

× After well doing that I have been achieving great success in my professional life.

✓ After doing that well, I have achieved great success in my professional life.

The phrase 'After well doing that' is awkward; it should be 'After doing that well'. Also, 'have been achieving' suggests ongoing action, but here a completed action 'have achieved' fits better. This improves clarity and tense usage.

× As per my perspective, I think people don't like to write the write them down because they think it's a waste of time.

✓ From my perspective, I think people don't like to write them down because they think it's a waste of time.

'As per my perspective' is awkward; 'From my perspective' is more natural. Also, 'write the write them down' is redundant; 'write them down' suffices. This correction improves naturalness and removes redundancy.

× Nowadays people are more enthusiastic and they want everything at once.

✓ Nowadays people are less patient and they want everything at once.

The original sentence is acceptable but contextually 'less patient' better explains why people want everything immediately. This is a suggestion for clarity rather than strict grammar correction.

× They don't want to wait and they don't have that much of level of patience to to sit and write their future goals in an outfit.

✓ They don't want to wait and they don't have that much patience to sit and write their future goals in one go.

'That much of level of patience' is incorrect; it should be 'that much patience'. Also, 'in an outfit' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in one go' meaning all at once. This corrects preposition and phrase usage.

× I don't usually use my phone very much, so that's why I, whenever I have to write it down, I always use notepad because it's easy to carry.

✓ I don't usually use my phone very much, so whenever I have to write something down, I always use a notepad because it's easy to carry.

'Write it down' is vague; 'write something down' is clearer. Also, 'use notepad' needs an article 'a' before 'notepad'. This improves pronoun clarity and article usage.

× And I, and The thing is that writing them down on a, on a paper, it's very beneficial for my literacy skills and it also give me more knowledge about, about how I'm going to use that.

✓ And the thing is that writing them down on paper is very beneficial for my literacy skills and it also gives me more knowledge about how I'm going to use that.

'On a, on a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct phrase without an article. Also, 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'. This corrects article usage and subject-verb agreement.