List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use more natural and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid filler words like 'you know' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I used to make a shopping list because it made my shopping quicker and more convenient. However, now I prefer shopping without a list to enjoy browsing freely.

Gợi ý: Focus on clearer sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how the list helps your work.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a daily to-do list that includes my wake-up time, work tasks, and bedtime. This helps me stay organised and manage my time effectively.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and improve grammar. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide clearer reasons with examples.

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because it makes their life feel rigid. For example, they prefer to be flexible and go with the flow rather than strictly following a list.

Gợi ý: Improve pronunciation and sentence clarity. Avoid filler words and use linking words to compare both methods clearly.

Ví dụ: I used to write lists on paper because it helped me remember better. However, nowadays I prefer using my smartphone since it's more convenient and accessible.

× Last time, yes, I used to make a list when I go for shopping, you know, it's make my shopping time easier and convenience.

✓ Last time, yes, I used to make a list when I went shopping, you know, it made my shopping time easier and more convenient.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Used to' indicates past habit, so the verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went'. Also, 'it's make' is incorrect; it should be 'it made' to match past tense. 'Convenience' is a noun; the adjective 'convenient' is needed here, and 'more' is added for comparison.

× it's make my shopping time easier and convenience.

✓ it made my shopping time easier and more convenient.

The word 'convenience' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe 'shopping time'. Therefore, 'convenient' is correct, and 'more' is added to form the comparative adjective.

× Then I can just, you know, grab whatever things I need on my list.

✓ Then I can just, you know, grab whatever things I need from my list.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'list'. The correct preposition is 'from' when referring to items taken from a list.

× But currently I just love to go shop without a list, yes.

✓ But currently I just love to go shopping without a list, yes.

The verb 'go' should be followed by the gerund form 'shopping' to indicate the activity.

× I usually make a list for my to do work, you know like for at least for a a day.

✓ I usually make a list for my to-do work, you know, like for at least a day.

The phrase 'for at least for a a day' contains redundant prepositions and repeated articles. It should be simplified to 'for at least a day'.

× You know like what time should I wake up, then what I will do after wake up, then I go to work, then what I need to do after walk, then what time I should go to bed.

✓ You know, like what time I should wake up, then what I will do after waking up, then I go to work, then what I need to do after work, then what time I should go to bed.

The phrase 'after wake up' should be 'after waking up' using the gerund form. Also, 'after walk' is incorrect; it should be 'after work'.

× then what I need to do after walk

✓ then what I need to do after work

The word 'walk' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'work' to refer to the activity after which tasks are planned.

× You know some people trying to be flexible but with the least thing they can't be really flexible.

✓ You know some people try to be flexible but with the list they can't be really flexible.

'Trying' should be 'try' to agree with plural subject 'some people'. Also, 'least thing' is incorrect; it should be 'list'.

× They can't be just go with the flow, you know, they need to follows the list then some that will make their life difficult.

✓ They can't just go with the flow, you know, they need to follow the list and that will make their life difficult.

'Be just go' is incorrect; it should be 'just go'. 'Follows' should be 'follow' to agree with plural subject 'they'. 'Then some that' is unclear and corrected to 'and that'.

× I used to make a lace on paper before we started to use smartphone, you know, uh, I think is I can memorize more by writing on the paper, but nowaday we all using smartphones.

✓ I used to make a list on paper before we started to use smartphones, you know, uh, I think I can memorize more by writing on paper, but nowadays we all use smartphones.

'Lace' is a typo for 'list'. 'Smartphone' should be plural 'smartphones'. 'Is I can' is incorrect; it should be 'I can'. 'Nowaday' should be 'nowadays'. 'We all using' should be 'we all use'.