Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list whenever I go for shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Till now in my life I have not made a list to do work and I think if anyone make a list to make a list and plan their study or a work that how they have to do it can be a good option.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because some people have a good memory and they usually remember the things they have to do or they have to buy so they don't have to make a list. And sometimes people think that it is a boring task.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I used to prefer making list in my own mobile notepad because it is very easy and convenient for me. But I have seen many peoples in my country as they used to make list on pen paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and direct, which is good. However, to improve, try to avoid redundancy such as 'go for shopping' and instead say 'go shopping'. Also, add a bit more detail to enrich your answer, for example, why you make a list or how it helps you.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then explain your opinion with linking words. Avoid repetition like 'make a list to make a list'.
Ví dụ: No, I have never made a list for my work. However, I believe making a list to plan tasks can be very helpful for organizing study or work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Your answer is good and relevant. To improve, try to use linking words like 'also' or 'furthermore' to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid starting sentences with 'Because' in spoken English; instead, use 'Some people don't like making lists because...'.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember tasks easily. Also, they may find making lists boring and time-consuming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct tense and plural forms, and link your ideas clearly. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient, but many people in my country still use pen and paper.'
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easy and convenient. However, many people in my country still prefer using pen and paper for their lists.
× Yes, I usually make a list whenever I go for shopping.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list whenever I go shopping.
The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect. In English, we say 'go shopping' without the preposition 'for'. This is a common collocation where 'go' is followed directly by the verb in the -ing form to indicate the activity.
× Till now in my life I have not made a list to do work and I think if anyone make a list to make a list and plan their study or a work that how they have to do it can be a good option.
✓ Till now in my life I have not made a list to do work and I think if anyone makes a list and plans their study or work, that how they have to do it can be a good option.
The sentence has multiple issues. First, 'if anyone make' should be 'if anyone makes' to agree with third person singular (Modal verb usage and subject-verb agreement). Also, 'a work' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable here. The phrase 'to make a list to make a list' is redundant and corrected to 'makes a list and plans'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× if anyone make a list to make a list and plan their study or a work that how they have to do it can be a good option.
✓ if anyone makes a list and plans their study or work, that how they have to do it can be a good option.
The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'anyone'. Similarly, 'plan' should be 'plans'. This is a third person singular subject-verb agreement issue.
× But I have seen many peoples in my country as they used to make list on pen paper.
✓ But I have seen many people in my country as they used to make lists on pen and paper.
The word 'peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is the plural of 'person' and does not take an 's'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists' because it refers to multiple lists. 'Pen paper' should be 'pen and paper' as two separate items.